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B2MeM 2011 Ficlets  by Eärillë

Title: What Was Right

Author: Eärillë

Rating: PG

Warnings: First Draft, (very mild) Gaur

Summary:
Choosing what is right and what is easy is a good-sized horror for anyone who encounters it. And anyway, what is the meaning of “betrayal,” actually? Everyone interprets it differently, after all; and Halbarad is just one of them.

Genres: Character Study, Ficlet, Hurt/Comfort

Place and Timeline: Eriador, Late Third Age

Characters: Aragorn, Halbarad

Words (in MS Word): 285

Point of View: Third Person Limited, Past Tense

Challenge: Day 9: Nargothrond:
Write a story or poem or create artwork where the characters have to decide between loyalty or betrayal.


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“Aragorn – please? You are coughing up blood! I do not know much of healing, you know that. We need to go to Imladris.” – It was perhaps the hundredth time Halbarad begged of his cousin, friend and chieftain. But Aragorn was as stubborn as the bed of cold, cold rocks he was lying on, and that did not help matters any. They had been arguing since evening had started, and now it was rather late at night already. (More precisely, Halbarad did the talking and Aragorn did the glaring or head-shaking – when he still could.) The side of Aragorn’s head was swelling at a worrying rate, despite the blood that continuously seeped from under his matted fringes, and he had begun to drift in and out of consciousness.

“Damn that rock – Aragorn! You must keep awake.” – Because Aragorn had just closed his eyes again, and his face was completely white now save the places where blood had caked over. – “Gah. Sorry, cousin, but I am not going to lose you like this.” – Because his previous pleas had fallen on deaf ears, given how Aragorn was really closing eyes now, not opening them again.

As ignorant as he was about advanced healing, Halbarad did know how to treat casualties during rescue and evacuation. And he was thankful for that now, as he fled towards the Elf-haven, who had been Aragorn’s sanctuary until three years beforehand, with his precious burden. As much as he valued Aragorn’s order, he valued his life more. He refused to live kinless, and the line of Kings must not be broken. King Arvedui’s stupidity, choosing what was easy instead of what was right when departing the Bay of Forochel, must not be repeated.

Title: The Answer

Author: Eärillë

Rating: G

Warning: First Draft

Summary:
Elves said that death was a gift to Men-kind; but not all Men believed it, ever seeking to disprove it. Tohren wanted to be one of the few who did so.

Genre: Character Study, Gapfiller

Place and Timeline: Middle-earth (undescribed), Middle Second Age (undescribed)

Characters: Annatar, OMC Númenorian chieftain

Words (in MS Word): 290

Point of view: Third Person Limited, Past Tense

 

  1. Challenge: Day 11: Himring:
    "Peace demands the most heroic labor and the most heroic sacrifices." Thomas Merton. Write a story or poem or create artwork where characters make sacrifices in order to achieve their goals.

Story Notes:
Annatar is, of course, Sauron. But we are not provided with the name of his Nazgûl, only that one of them was once called Khamûl. So I made this one up.

Author’s Notes:
I do not know if the timeline is right. Please tell me if I did it wrong. And here is my attempt to write something based on something I do (not) have an interest in. I hope you will enjoy it all the same; and pardon the twisted answer to the theme.
Sincerely,
Rey

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The smile was sweet and honest in seeming. Tohren hesitated. He was quite tempted by what Annatar offered him.

Immortality! Who in the race of Men did not wish for immortality? The Elves mocked them all by the prattle about death as Eru’s gift to Men. It was so easy for them – they were immortals! But few Men would pursue this ambitious goal.

Could he acquire himself a place among the said few people? Would he?

He was one of the chieftains trusted to rule their overseas holdings by the King of Númenor himself. He had a beautiful and charming wife and delightful, intelligent children, as well as privileged authority and a great wealth. Would he sacrifice them all for this one chance?

Annatar smiled encouragingly, hopefully, at him from his seat across the low table of his parlour. The beautiful diamond ring, glittering with the reflection of the lamp hanging above them, still sat invitingly on the centre of the table, and Tohren could not help laying a covetous look on it once in a while. The ring was his key to immortality and more power and wealth than what he had now, Annatar had said, and this was but a one-stand offer.

Tohren could not stand the thought of the ring passing to another man, just because he was too cowardly to take it for himself. He would not be able to suffer dying knowing that someone else had the immortality he so desired.

With a smile torn between sadness, glee and determination, he leant forward slightly on his seat and picked up the ring. He fitted it to his middle finger, and admired the look of it on his hand for a moment.

He was immortal now.

Title: “No, Thank You.”

Author: Eärillë

Rating: G

Warnings: First Draft, Sensitive Topics

Summary:
Elrond refused to be the next high king of the Ñoldor for a very, very valid reason, and it was not all for reasons of disinterest or honour.

Genres: Character Study, Dark Humor, Satire, Vignette

Place and Timeline: Eriador, Middle Second Age

Characters: Elrond, Ñoldorin Elves

Words (in MS Word): 335

Point of View: Third Person Limited, Past Tense

Challenge: Day 22: Erebor:
Refugee issues are our issues; their plight is our plight. Write a story or poem or create artwork that illustrates the situation of some displaced group in Middle-earth.

Story Notes:
Companion piece to my story “Veils.” And like the main story, this ficlet sort of pokes fun at the Ñoldor. Not that I as the author despise them, though…

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Elrond bit his lower lip, trying to contain his exasperation and anger. He had only spent several days in the company of the refugees from lost Eregion, but already he wished he were drowned in the Great Sea – or better, dead together with many other people in the Havens of Sirion. Ñoldor—! Well, he was a quarter Ñoldo himself, but he fancied himself not as rowdy and prideful as these people.

And now, the ellon who had been yammering orders at him as if he were the ellon’s servant, who had just gotten the idea that he should get a tent of his own, shouted at him again… and about the same thing.

Elrond halted his steps and closed his eyes, swallowing a trickle of blood flowing from his hard-bitten lip. – `Belain – help me!` – Could he escape somewhere? But no, Ereinion had entrusted this task to him most faithfully. And besides, there were some refugees that were not so unbearable as Narpilindo.

Well, not so unbearable, but still with their own attitude problems…

“Hey, half-breed, do you have any lunch for us? It is noon already!”

– `Belain!` – “I apologise, Miss. Our rations are running low.” – `And I am a healer, not a cook!`

And still, he had to face his patience, who also only had complaints when they were awake and not moaning their pain, especially an ill-raised youth they said was named Cúmelen. That boy had even annoyed the usually-calm Erestor, and worked his captain Fimlin into fits of colourful ranting – without trying!

But working with them bore him a silver lining also: Now he could firmly say no to Ereinion if the High King again wheedled him into becoming his heir – not merely his regent. Something like this was quite enough for his long lifetime, thank you very much.

– “Hey, where are you going, Sinda? Look after my daughter, will you?”

And here he thought he would just finish his duties in the healing tent and retire briefly to his own bedroll…





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