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In Shadow Realm  by Legolass 13 Review(s)
Edhel MaethorReviewed Chapter: 32 on 1/30/2010
Legolass,

This story is amazing. All of us fans appreciate all the hard work you put into it. I was literally gripping the edge of my seat! I hope to see more of your work in future other than what I have already read.

I'm working on a story about how Legolas and Aragorn meet. Is there a way I could send a chapter or two to you and you can tell me what you think? I'm not sure I have as much 'knowledge' of Middle Earth as you seem to have. Just let me know!

Great story!

Edhel Maethor

Author Reply:

It's been ages since a review came my way at this SoA site, Edhel, so yours is MUCH appreciated, thank you. :-) It's always to know one's writing is enjoyed.

Unfortunately, work has been very demanding and so I've been unable to write much more than the stories that I've already posted, though I hope to write something new at some point. :-( For the same reason, I wouldn't be of much help to anyone in terms of beta-ing a story, I'm afraid, but if you're okay with me taking a quick look at your two chapters, I'd be happy to. You can mail it to me at mazquendi@msn.com.

Thanks again for your review, Edhel. Talk to you later!

Red SquirrelReviewed Chapter: 32 on 3/5/2008
Dear Legolass,
we are having a very successful campaign here in Aswan. Although two weeks ago, it was cold enough to drink hot mulled wine on the terrace over the Nile at night, the weather is now beautiful and very warm. So far, we have been able to excavate two very large buildings, one soldiers barracks and the headquarters building, complete with strong room and sacellum. There was also a large pit with a depot of several complete ceramic vessels for storage, which was exiting to uncover. We have also been visiting the Western Desert Oasis, where some Roman forts still stand to a height of about 15 metres or so. We went by four-wheel-drive, but we still got stuck in a sand dune and had to dig ourselves out again. ;-) Now the campaign is almost over and I will soon be back home again. It is incredible how time is flying by here! I am looking forward to meet you and our favorite Elf and Ranger soon in Arda again.
Till then, lots of love and warm hugs,
your rodent
:-)

Author Reply:
My dear, dear rodent,

How wonderful to hear from you! I'd begun to wonder if we'd lost you to the desert sands. Sounds like you've had a very exciting and fruitful dig - I wonder if it ever feels eerie when you dig up something that old... Anyway, you must let me know if any of your discoveries are shown in some documentary on the Nat Geographic or Discovery Channel. Make sure you got your mug shot in there too, of course. I'll watch out for that bushy tail!

So you'll be home again soon, and I'm happy for you. Now, if I didn't know you better, I'd say that this message from you doubled as a subtle way of asking for a new story, lol! But maybe not, which would be good, because I'm still struggling for time to write up the ideas whirling around in my mind, sigh...

But story or no story, I do hope I get to hear from you again. You were missed. :-)

Legolass

TariReviewed Chapter: 32 on 10/10/2007
What a glorious ending. If I could have attached an Emoticon from another site to this email, it would have been of one bowing to you.

Tari

Author Reply:

Author Reply:
Tari, this is a long overdue reply.

Thank you so much for all the reviews you left. I appreciate that you wrote them even though the tale had already been finished. Most of all, I'm really glad you enjoyed this tale that I loved writing so much. It's worth it when there are wonderful readers like you who love the characters as I do.

I don't know that I can change names and publish the story, as so much of it is really based on Tolkien's earlier works. Perhaps when I retire from my full-time job now, I will take your suggestion into consideration and actually publish a story for money. :-) Thanks for all your encouraging words. If I ever find the time to write a new LOTR tale, I hope I will see you again.

With much appreciation,

Legolass


grumpyReviewed Chapter: 32 on 7/4/2007
While I am glad that they showed mercy to the villagers, I did get a kick out of Gimli and freinds singing act. Glad that Aragorn has Legolas, as someone who he can talk to, and help him. loved your story, and hope to see more. Sorry this review took so long, I needed a holiday to catch up on things.

Author Reply:
Hi grumpy,

Underneath all your amusing reviews, you really do love the depth of emotions behind the story's events and characters, don't you? :-) I shall miss reading them - thank you for all your support. Hope to see you again when(ever) a new story comes up.

Take care till then!
Legolass

Tiari ClovisReviewed Chapter: 32 on 7/2/2007
Did that blank one go through? I don't know what I was thinking {Shakes head sadly}

Anyway on with the review! What a wonderful ending to the story I really loved it. You write so beautifully and express your idea's so well- I know how hard that is to do. I very much enjoy reading your stories and look forward to each chapter.

I love your idea about the Glass pool for our hero's. You really get the closeness of their friendship down very well and yet express the love for the others in their lives as well.

My favorite part in this chapter has to be when they arrived at the Glass pool and Aragorn said:

"For those dark, dark hours, my friend – who knows how many? – you were all I held on to, all that I believed in - indeed, all that I knew,” Aragorn said. “I escaped a fate worse than death only because you were there, and you knocked at the door of my soul till I answered, even as you promised you would. Ever shall that door be unlocked for you, Legolas.”

What a heart melter and my favorite line in the chapter.

Well I didn't notice anything this time, perhaps I wasn't looking hard enough?




Author Reply:

Hi Tiari,

Yes I did get a blank review - but I have deleted it so you don't have to shake your head sadly anymore. :-)

Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad the chapter ends the story well for you. I love writing about their friendship and am heartened when someone else appreciates it just as much.

Hope to see you again some time; your company is always welcome!

Legolass

Red SquirrelReviewed Chapter: 32 on 6/28/2007
Thank you merci beaucoup danke schoen schukran for this final (*sigh*) beautiful and after all the heartache much needed chapter. And above all, many thanks for the (totally undeserved, but much appreciated) dedication! I love Hamille's bonding, he so totally deserves that kind of happiness.
*ow!*
Legolas' embarrassment at the question of his own wedding was that hilarious, LOL!! The entire female population of the Greenwood and half the maidens in Gondor, ha! He's really rather innocently blind (blindly innocent?) in some respects.
*ouch!*
Fierthwain's final fate appeals a lot to some of my lower instincts, I must admit. Somehow I'd never pictured him going to execution, but Gimli's revenge is so, so sweet - let me join in that particular tune about war and victory :-)! Putting him to some useful labour in Ithilien seems a very good idea, although I'm not sure that will cure him of his stupidity. Perhaps Gimli's songs will hammer some sense into him, LOL!
*ow!* (That's the Hamille fan-club, throwing acorns at me. I'm not QUITE sure if they want to feed me or chase me up a tree...) :-D
With "Shadow Realm" you have created an exceptionally beautiful part of Arda again. I really don't know which I like better, "White Tree" or "Shadow Realm", they are quite different and brilliant and I enjoyed them both immensely, I really can't say, but I do so love your style of writing.
Nononononono I won't say it will you no I won't! I won't ask ifyou'regoingtowriteanotherstorysoon - there now I did it anyway, but never mind! Let's keep in touch all the same; I will send you a mail before I start off into the wild again ;-) !
And, welcome back home; that must be an awful jet lag to sleep off. I hope you find the time to do it at leisure, you deserve all the rest you can get!

HUGS
Your faithful rodent


Author Reply:
My favorite furry friend:

I happened to be online when this came in, so I'd better get in a reply before I lose you to the wilds again (although that's not till August if I remember correctly).

I would offer you plaster and ointment for the many acorns thrown at you, but the reactions to Hamille's bonding have been positive so far - so I guess they aim to feed you. :-) However, I can't be certain that some readers aren't silently plotting to cement you in while you hibernate...

It's okay that you have asked ifi'mgoingtowriteanotherstorysoon. All it takes is for me to answer IwillwriteoneassoonasIcanwhichmaynotbeanytimenextweekorevennextmonthbutI'llgetaroundtoiteventually.

There. Answered. :-)

I did sleep off much of the jet lag, but am off again to another work retreat tomorrow, sigh... Can I borrow your nest to hide in??

Yes please, let's keep in touch. I shall miss you when you go off again, but I hope you will check in from time to time - especially if I manage to start another tale. :-) Thank you very much for your continuous support on this one!

Take care always. Warm hugs, dear rodent.
Legolass

NoorReviewed Chapter: 32 on 6/25/2007
Thank you for such a great tale with a resolution that is much welcomed after all the earlier drama and nailbiting!

Noor

Author Reply:
I'm glad the ending pleases you, Noor. Thanks for reading the tale, and I hope to have more of your company whenever I can post again.

Legolass

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 32 on 6/25/2007
THis has been a great story and I am sorry it is over.I liked the way you showed it took Aragorn a long time to recover, which was very realistic. I love your Aragorn and you make Legolas far more interesting than I usually find him. I'm also pleased you have included Arwen, Faramir and Eldarion. Aragorn's lesson is one we could all too well to heed. Thank you for a most enjoyable story.

Author Reply:
It's been a great pleasure having your company throughout the tale as well, Linda, and as I've said before, the approval of an Aragorn lover such as yourself means a lot to me. :-) Thanks for always being there, and hope to see you again some time.

Legolass

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 6/24/2007
wonderful ending Legolass and yet I didn't want to review. I think I'm reverting back to a 3 year old covering my eyes thinking if I can't see the monsters, they won't see me. Maybe if I don't review, the story won't end. I guess I'm feeling melancholy. Happy to see Hamille married but feeling like I'm losing a friend and as always moved by the depth of feelings you give our favorite heroes. Ah maybe that's what great writers do, make you feel things through their stories.

Well done Legolass

Enjoy California

Author Reply:
Mae govannen mellon nin,

I just got home an hour and a half ago (it was a nice break, thank you), and I need to sleep off the jet lag from a 20-hour journey (the journey TO Quebec took 26) - but I wanted to say hi to you first, and to tell you that I am SO sorry I didn't have time to call you while I was in the States. :-( But I will try to do from here some time - is that ironic or what? :-D

I know what you mean by 'losing' a friend because of Hamille's bonding - it's as if he now belongs to another world. (But I will make sure we don't lose him.) And I also understand the melancholy you feel at the end of the story - I actually feel the same way. It's been a wonderful journey, and I thank for staying with me throughout, Eliza. For my own sake as well as yours, I hope I come up with another story soon. I think it's the only way I can keep sane. In the meantime, let's keep in touch anyway.

Till our next monthly chat.
Hugs
Legolass


vampfan30Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 6/24/2007
wow, you can really weave a story. I have been with this one from the beginning, I think, & it has been fantastic from start to finish...........

Author Reply:
Thank you, vampfan, for having been with me on this journey - I've enjoyed your company. :-) Hope to see you again whenever I can post another.

Take care till then!
Legolass

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