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An Alphabet Book for the King's Children  by Larner 7 Review(s)
Agape4rivendellReviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/9/2017
Can't even speak after reading this. Heart-wrenching.

Author Reply: The tale of the finding of Thrain in the dungeons of Dol Guldur has been begging to be told, I find.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/17/2016
Very sad, indeed! But it is the beginning of another story in which the treasure will be retrieved. More dwarves will die in the process, but a hobbit will survive, taking with him a small ring that will start yet another story.

Author Reply: Oh, yes. Poor Thrain! But Erebor will be freed at last of the occupation of the dragon--he will be avenged, and Sauron will lose a potential ally on the eastern front.

Thanks so, Andrea!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/14/2016
Lost the last review!

Kindly King-maker keens for keyholder then keeps it for kith, kin and King-to-be.
I found this one both vivid and powerfully moving Larner.
Btw do I get a prize if I find three missed emboldenings? (Is that even a word?) "Gandalf knew for opening"



Author Reply: Lovely review here! Kudos! Heh!

I found even one more--missed four in this one, I realized. And if "emboldenings" isn't a word, perhaps it ought to be. If Shakespeare (or whoever wrote the plays attributed to him) added to the English vocabulary, why can't we, right? Heh!

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/13/2016
Ohhhhh, poor Thrain!! *shudder* What a chilling and well written gapfiller!


Author Reply: Thank you so, Kaylee. Eventually this will be expanded upon in Stirring Rings, of course.

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/13/2016
Wow! How sad and powerfully done.

Namarie, God bless, Antane

Author Reply: Thank you so, Antane. A week and a half left, and then another half a week and my new family member will be joining the crew!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/13/2016
Ohhh, this is so heartbreaking. *sniff* But a very nice gap filler.

Author Reply: We know that Gandalf found Thrain in the Necromancer's dungeons but that he couldn't save him from this imprisonment. So, this is what I tend to imagine.

PSWReviewed Chapter: 11 on 12/13/2016
Well, that's a sad story.... 😢

It's a good thing Gandalf is as persistent as he is, or this secret might have died w the unfortunate dwarf. But the wizard was certainly the right man for the job.

Thanks for writing!

Author Reply: This, of course, will eventually be made part of Stirring Rings, supposing, of course, I ever get this next chapter about Cirion and Eorl finished and posted. Aargh!

Thank you for reading, PSW.

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