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Trust a Brandybuck and a Took!  by Grey Wonderer 19 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 49 on 3/18/2012
I just wanted you to know that I still read these adorable stories, I still love them, and I'm so happy you wrote them.

Author Reply: Thank you so very much! (((((HUGS)))))

I miss writing these little looks at the hobbits as children. It is so very sweet of you to let me know that you still enjoy them. They make me think of a time when everyone was writing and all of us were having such fun! Now and again, I get the urge to write more of these. The next time that happens, maybe I will. : )

Glory UnderhillReviewed Chapter: 49 on 4/15/2006
Hysterical! I especially loved the ending where the POV shifts to Merry recalling the coin purse through the years. Lovely!

Author Reply: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this one and thank you for reviewing it!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 49 on 4/9/2006
Ah, dear, dear little Pippin stealing coin purses and other objects, and mouthing them as only a very small child can. Oh, I can see it, too--and the swallowing of the copper penny. Every child has done that one, I think.

And then Merry embarrassing him about it--oh, so appropriate! And that Pippin would treasure it for the sake of the one from whom he stole it....

Author Reply: I do think that Pippin would have been a bit spoiled at that point as the youngest in his family and the only lad. I also think that he might have done more than a bit of this sort of thing. Only Merry sees what is really going on. LOL I think most children have eaten a penny or two and other entertaining things as well. I once ate play-doh. Maybe that explains what's wrong with me now.

Yelena_of_BaelandalaiReviewed Chapter: 49 on 3/31/2006
Thanks for such a great story. It was the perfect way to end a crazy day!

Author Reply: Thank you! Sorry to be slow in responding but I've been off line for a few days. Thank you for the review and I do hope that your day was crazy in a good way!

LilyReviewed Chapter: 49 on 3/8/2006
That's a delightful little tale. As charming as toddlers can be, they can also be mean....

Poor Frodo! Well, he didn't want to listen and that's the price to pay :)
A wonderful ending. Great to see the purse is still valued, now probably more than ever.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for reading and I am very glad that you enjoyed this one. Toddlers can be a handful and I imagine that Pippin was indeed a handful! LOL

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 49 on 2/28/2006
Merry is proved right about the bossy and light-fingered little Took - but no-one can say that he doesn't value what he ... acquires.

Lovely story - I think I especially like Esmeralda's unmovable belief in the charming innocence of baby Pippin. Yes, right!!

Author Reply: Acquires is a very polite word for it! LOL Glad you enjoyed this one. I always enjoy writing Esmeralda and most of the time I have her knowing far more than she does in this tale. In fact, she is usually ahead of the game. This once I let Merry be the one with all of the answers. I figure that every now and then even Esmeralda would be taken in by a cute face. Thanks for reviewing!

cathleenReviewed Chapter: 49 on 2/28/2006
GW, how could I ever get tired of this wonderful series! This is such a cute story. You really capture the mischief in Pip's nature and it's quite obvious it started from the day he was born! I love the reactions Merry has to his young cousin and the way that Frodo gave in to Pippin just like Merry said he would. And Esmerelda's reactions are so genuine. She didn't have a clue. It seems Pip knew what was going on though and the way he stuck out his tongue at his cousins showed what a keen little manipulator he already is! The ending really wraps up this tale nicely. Thanks for a very entertaining look at Pip's childhood.
Cathleen

Author Reply: So very pleased that you enjoyed this and thank you for taking the time to review it. This series of stories has gone on far longer than I would have imagined when I wrote the first one. I have no idea where they keep coming from but I do thank you for reading.

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 49 on 2/27/2006
This was perfect. LOL, I remember some other routines of Bill Cosby's that you might be in, wink, wink. You have such a way with baby Pippin, and young, saucy Merry and Frodo--gotta love him! You had me laughing--and it sure felt good to laugh today. Thank you!

Pippinfan

Author Reply: So glad that this made you laugh. Who knows? Maybe I will wind up with an entire collection of Cosby-inspired fictions before this is over. Odd that this came from a stand-up routine but then I have never managed to be conventional. Hope you have a good week and I will email soon!

GamgeeFestReviewed Chapter: 49 on 2/27/2006
He clutches it to his cheek and rubs the suede against his face and smiles, tears drying on his chubby cheeks. “Tank yoo,” he says in a squeaky little voice. He then gives me a warning look and says, “Mine.” just to let me know that I won’t be getting it back and then proceeds put the drawstring into his mouth and suck on it.

LOL, that was adorable! Well, probably not for Frodo and most definetly not while Pippin was screaming. I've forgotten what a pain kids at that age can be. I can well imagine Pippin doing something like that. And Merry was just being a brat! If I had been Frodo, I would have strangled him. And Esme, coddling poor, injured, abused Pippin. :) At least he kept the purse and it will be a nice little memento of Frodo. :)

Author Reply: I always seem to put Frodo in the middle of these things and I really do owe him a story where he wins out. LOL I will have to give that some thought because I have tortured him quite a bit lately. Good thing Merry and Pippin out grew all of that. LOL I look forward to your Cosby-inspired story too!

Baggins BabeReviewed Chapter: 49 on 2/27/2006
This was lovely - I suspect even I would have given in to Pippin, the shameless little manipulator. I loved spoilt Pip and jealous Merry and hapless Frodo wilting under Esme's stern gaze. Not to mention a little faunt with bells on his trousers - too cute!
The end was perfect - so Pip kept that purse 'because it belonged to someone special.' Oh, and Merry was right - Pip does have it coming to him!

Author Reply: Yes, I think Merry will get even with Pip by telling this story often. LOL The jingle bells are my take on the tiny bells that people used to put on children's shoes only with a little hobbit faunt there wouldn't be any shoes so... So glad you enjoyed it and thank you for reviewing!

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