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Going, Going, Gone  by Lindelea 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/20/2011
Merry and Pippin have yet to figure out what's happening! I think it was reading this that led me to write "Filled with Light as with Water," actually!

LindorienReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/1/2004
Okay, this has me giggling. Am I supposed to be giggling? Because if this is a Very Serious Work, then I have a Very Serious Problem. The thought of Frodo fading away, starting with his hand and Sam shaking it. It just reminded me of Lindorien erasing Faramir's arm. Sorry about that. Anyway, please let me know if I am having the appropriate reaction. Lindorien

Author Reply: Ah. You have good instincts. This story is of that curious breed: Angst/humour. Yes, it is appropriate to giggle, if you are giggling in the right places, that is.

Thanks for commenting!

Author Reply: p.s. Lindorien erased Faramir's arm? There has got to be more to that story... Do tell!

OakWolfReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/1/2004
Oh goody goody goody!Fine job Lindelea,I thought Frodo would surely be invicible by the tale's end,good twist just enough citrus without the full lemon!(and I apologize if I misspelled Invisable,Ack I have no idea what Im doing!)Great Job!!

Author Reply: Why, thank you for your encouraging words! Nice turn of phrase: Just enough citrus without the full lemon... catchy!

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