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Jewels  by Lindelea 3 Review(s)
Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/20/2006
The darkness creeps in, but still, this is more the feel of things that I have always had. Frodo is fading, but still not overcome. Well done, Lin!

Author Reply: Thank you!

Yes, Frodo didn't strike me as so very miserable and depressed that he had to leave, although I wrote this before reading JRRT's letters and gaining additional insight. I think that his gallant spirit would have fought on to the last gasp, if he had not had the avenue of escape that the Elves offered. And I think he took that offer reluctantly, and perhaps more for Bilbo's sake (that the old hobbit not be all alone, without any other hobbits, in that fair land) than his own.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/19/2006
So--Saradoc and Esmeralda are recognizing the signs, while the other Travellers are in denial. Although I suspect Pippin is merely keeping his own counsel.

But in the depths of his heart Merry is recognizing what will come....

Author Reply: No, actually, I have Pippin and Sam in denial and Merry keeping his own counsel. But it might easily have gone the other way, with Merry being so close to Frodo from his early years.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/19/2006
'I could give you the same answer. It goes.' He took a deep breath of the sweet summer air. 'Life is good, Merry. I might not have chosen the path that was set before me, but I cannot complain of the outcome.' He gestured vaguely to the laughing children, sunshine sparkling on the water, the bright sky, the myriad greens of grass and tree. 'Just look around, Merry. There is no Shadow here. And we helped to make the difference.'

Oh Frodo. Seeing with his head and so totally committed to seeing his friends and the Shire heal but he can't share it. And Merry coping and turning his experiences to the good of the Shire with an able assistant in Pippin.

Great to see this Lindelea.

Author Reply: Thank you! Tuesdays are a busy day for us, so it makes Tuesday a good day to give an already-written chapter a buff and a rub and post it. Therefore, unless the bronchitis attacks again, this ought to be updated on Tuesday!

It's a plan, anyhow.

This part always grabs me in the throat. These chapters were a result of my trying to work out just why Frodo had to leave the Shire, for I simply could not see him leaving all those he loved unless it was a matter of life and death. But no time for a long drawn-out discourse on the matter--aren't you relieved? *g*

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