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We Were Young Once ~ II  by Conquistadora 4 Review(s)
mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 22 on 11/17/2019
Can't wait to find out why Gil Galad was waiting.

RedheredhReviewed Chapter: 22 on 9/3/2006
I am sure it felt just as quick and slow as that. Excellent image for the scene. The short chapter worked as a reflection of the critical moment. What lead to it and its aftermath are outside of Thranduil's urgent decision.

Could have done without the NO!, though. It's become a film cliche, I personally dislike.


valjeanReviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/25/2006
Oh...(I can't think of appropriate word to incert here...at least not one that includes four letteres, so I just let you use your imagination.) I hate it when there's a character death,(especially if I like the character), even when it is necassary in order to preserve canon. Darn, darn, darn, DARN!

Ahm. Other than that, it was a good chapter. Kind of short, but it works with the subject matter. Hang in there,it sounds like you're nearly done!

Author Reply:
Don't I know it. :'( Poor Oropher is going to have to get a write-up on the blog at least.

Getting there! I think there are three or four chapters left. Unfortunately, I don't think I can write them all tomorrow . . .

k_lara7Reviewed Chapter: 22 on 8/25/2006
The Fall of Oropher has been much debated on what events transpired to cause his death and the decimation of Greenwood's Army. You bring the conflict to life so well here.

Author Reply:
Thanks. :) It came to me all at once, and I just put it down as I saw it.

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