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Where the Merlin Cries  by Lindelea 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/30/2005
Lovely imagery, and the idea that the merlin is a "hobbit hawk." Fastred is slowly coming to realize there is more to his companions than he'd first thought. And love Sam's reference to weeding. Very apt for our favorite gardener.

Author Reply: It was so much fun, researching merlins and moorlands for this story. Sometimes the research is just as interesting as the writing, as I'm sure you've found, from the meticulously crafted stories you write.

MirielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/2/2003
I'd comment, but all I can say is the formatting is bad. It is all bold and in one paragraph. Other then that, I'm glad that Fastred finally met Elenor! (And Rose-that should prove to be most interesting!)

Author Reply: Thank you for letting me know! I fixed the formatting after reading your review.

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