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| Of Falcons and Mūmakil by Lialathuveril | 1 Review(s) |
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| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/24/2008 |
| The chapter title was clever. Methinks this is the only story where I enjoyed the female archery scenes. The last scene was very, very enjoyable for me, their "epithets" for each other were very funny since I have a very good idea what's going to happen in the end. (wink wink) Author Reply: Yes, I had to be careful not to turn her into a Mary Sue over the archery. But she really wins because of a stroke of luck (or fate) and knows it. And now at least they both know that the other one has a temper! Lia | |