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| Winds of Change by Lady Bluejay | 6 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/12/2006 |
| Eomer is going to wish he'd worked more on his memory! One Valier isn't just like any other. He might also end up hoping that he catches on before two young ladies realise he is on another planet and decide to torment him further. M'mm. Picturing Eomer standing in the sun waiting for his hair to dry ... I suspect 'Nessa' finds the view quite appealing. And then, he is so clearly distracted in her company. She and Eowyn could have a lot of fun on that ride. The one that Amrothos will not mind her taking with the King of Rohan. Because he is probably otherwise engaged. Potential for confusion: great. | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/11/2006 |
| Oh I am glad that I am not the only reviewer who is screaming at the computer about mistaken identity! *g* Poor Eomer. But I do think the idea that it would take 12 seconds for Eomer to propose is overly long! I think 2 might be nearer! | |
| MithLuin | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/11/2006 |
| Poor silly Eomer, not realizing that it is his friend's _sister_, not his intended ;). Mistaken identity stories are fun, and you are painting such a nice picture of Eomer and Eowyn, and his friendships with Aragorn and Elfhelm as well. I hope we see more of Aragorn soon! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/10/2006 |
| Ah, mistaken identity is always so fun to deal with! Beautiful details, and lovely drawing out of the tension here. I find I do like it a good deal. | |
| Alison H | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/10/2006 |
| Am I realllly, reallly wide of the mark in thinking that Nessa is Lothiriel? There were plenty of clues in this chapter---or are you just out to tease your readers? A very enjoyable chapter and I loved Nessa's(Lothiriel's?) bright chatter and confident manner.Oh, and she was surprised that Eomer would think it a problem with Amorothos if she went riding with him.....mmm Love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! Ali. | |
| lark | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/10/2006 |
| you absolutely can't write fast enough for me. poor Eomer. how shocked will he be when he finds out her true identity? I imagine you'll need to draw that out as long as possible; with this setup, it will take him approx. 12 seconds to ask Imrahil for her hand! | |