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Tales of Life  by Aelaer 4 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/30/2006
I like the last line - it relates the defeat of the Corsairs with Thorongil's later adventure and puts the two together.

Author Reply: Thank you! It wasn't originally planned, but I thought it fit well. Glad you liked it.

meckinockReviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006
Very nice, Suvi! I like how Thorongil inspired confidence in the men.

Author Reply: Thanks. Yea, Thorongil definitely is the kind of guy to put confidence in people, which is extremely admirable.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006
Very well done, although I see what you mean about the ending.

A problem of wording in the first sentence of paragraph four, but otherwise well done indeed.

Author Reply: Yea, I see what you mean, now that I look back at it. I may edit it one of these days. XD Thanks for all of your reviews. <3

AmyReviewed Chapter: 22 on 10/29/2006
Lovely!

You made me feel as nervous as the crew about the pending attack.

*hearts Thorongil fics*

Author Reply: Aw, thanks. Yea, Thorongil fics are excellent, but so hard to come by. I love them as well.

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