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One Who Sticks Closer than a Brother  by Lindelea 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/7/2007
Last story I was begging him to twitch--now I'm begging him to call Tolly back to awareness so he can give over the memories of death from before.

Very vivid descriptions of the scene.

Author Reply: Thank you.

I think Ferdi just might hold the key. Now to figure out how he might articulate the important thought...

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 20 on 6/7/2007
Epic journeys do not have to be measured in days or miles and you are doing so well with Ferdi and Tolly. Thanks for the qick update. I shall have to remember that you respond to 'puppy eyes'!

Author Reply: You're welcome! Am trying to knock this story out quickly for several reasons--the schedule is due to get busy again by the weekend, and if I do find writing time there are a few other stories nagging at me but I don't want to start another work-in-progress until I finish something, and the MEFAs have started up again and I want to set aside some time to read!

Sorry if I sound breathless, but my writing partner is due for walkies soon and I am in haste.

Thanks for the note of encouragement!

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