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Neath Anor, Ithil, and Gil  by Larner 13 Review(s)
grumpyReviewed Chapter: 30 on 8/4/2008
Well I got a good cry out of this story, but it was a happy cry, because Beregond got to go into the white city again, and wear his old uniform.
Fluffy the cat says hi, she is helping me type this

Author Reply: I am so glad you found the tears engendered happy ones, Grumpy. I remember how proud Beregond had been to tell Pippin how satisfying it was to be found worthy to be a Guard of the Citadel, and I'm certain Aragorn had been made aware of that. That in the end he'd allow Beregond to fulfill his desire to see the city that was originally the home of his heart again just seemed right.

And my Lydia, the snowshoe Siamese, just left me her rent upon the bathroom floor--this time a small fieldmouse. I hope it's not the one I helped escape from her yesterday and returned outside! Heh! I'm certain she sends Fluffy her best. The poms are all quiet for the moment, though, and have no care for cats or mice, although little Ruffy sat upon the poor mouse's body for a time as if seeking to warm it somewhat.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 30 on 8/2/2008
Quite a touching story of Beregond's last days and final return to Minas Tirith. Well-written as usual!

Author Reply: Thank you so, Raksha. And I'm honored. Thank you again.

TiggerReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/31/2008
Oh Larner...You've made me cry w/this one. It's so lovely and I really do believe towards the end, Beregond was allowed to come hone. It's just something I can see both Aragorn and Faramir agreeing on and Beregond certainly deserved to come home after so many years of faithful service.

Beautifully, beautifully done my friend. Now I need to go and find a Kleenex. I didn't know until just now my box here in my room's empty. :o)

Author Reply: Oh, I did? I'm honored to have moved you so, Tigger. Yes, it was time for Beregond to come home! Thank you!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/30/2008
I am on borrowed time on a French keyboard but I had to stop in and say how much this moved me Larner. Very glad he came back to his city once more.

Author Reply: Thank you so, Harrowcat. I believe he'd be allowed to come "home" to die. Thank you. Have a good remainder of your vacation.

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/30/2008
Oh, I really do like Beregond being allowed to come home for his final days - and it's really not changing his sentence, in an odd sort of way. Forgiveness and justice all at once - and his passing and funeral are particularly appropriate.

Just lovely!

Author Reply: Thank you so, SS. Yes, mercy--and love expressed. Appropriate to a hero of the stories.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/29/2008
This is truly outstanding!I just loved it and it brought tears to my eyes.How like Aragorn and Faramir to visit Beregond and Aragorn to allow him to return home to die.Thank you for such a treat to read this wonderful story!

Author Reply: I am honored, Linda! Thank you for your enthusiasm!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/29/2008
Thank you Larner for that beautiful, emotional(sob) story, I always thought even thou nothing happened to him for what he did other than having been banished from the White City being told he couldn't come back was rather harsh as he was saving Faramir's life, I am glad he got to come back to what he must of thought of was his home,but who was under the white tree? You know I had to ask. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: All the honor in the world could never make up for being forced to leave what he had to think of as his true home, I think.

As for who else was under the White Tree--well, I never said it was THIS White Tree, did I? Heh! No, I suspect that someone was under the White Tree on Tol Eressea that night, and he sensed it while touching the bark of the Tree there by the Citadel.

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/29/2008
Oh, very well done, Larner! I've always liked Beregond and it was nice to see him allowed to come home at last. I especially loved the tie-in with how the Noldor were allowed to return home to Aman and how could the people of Gondor be any less forgiving than the Valar.

Author Reply: Oh, I'm so glad you liked that, Radbooks. Thank you! I am honored.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/29/2008
Ohhhh, I'm all weepy with good tears. This is so lovely...

The King showed him the whole of the city, now cleansed of wounds, its gardens filled with trees going gold with the autumn’s advance, late roses and chrysanthemums glowing like small fires, doves celebrating the last of the sunset by wheeling about the Tower of Ecthelion, their wings catching the golden light.

What a marvelous story, full of love and hope and wonder.

Author Reply: I'm honored--to evoke such emotion is always reassuring. And am so glad you liked that particularly. Thank you so much, Shirebound.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 30 on 7/29/2008
That was wonderful Larner, and very moving!

And it shows that indeed a new time has come with a new king who is very different from the old steward, Denethor. For I fear under Denethor's rule such an act would have been impossible!

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Andrea. And yes, Aragorn is quite the contrast in so many ways to Denethor.

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