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Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices  by Lady Bluejay 3 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 5 on 1/4/2008
Good for Eomer. A good use of a mirror. Now Edwick is getting over the sorry-for-himself stage, he should be OK - since is is brave and heroic and loving.

And 'Seron' has plans for Lothiriel ... Somehow the vision of him meticulously arranging the little things, so that the big things have to flow along a path of his making is very, very Mithrandir.

Author Reply: Eomer is already showing his leadership qualities and I am sure Edwick will come to terms with his injury.

Glad you think my Mithrandir is in character.

Thanks for reading and reviewing - you must be between stories to have read four chapters! LBJ

AlquawendeReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/29/2007
Poor Bergit! I would sink under all that work and the recent events. Eomer is so gallant to her and it makes me wish all men were like him. I'm glad though that her husband has gotten rid of his pride to make baskets. Reminds me of another story here at SoA.

I like that Lothiriel won't be a spoiled princess. She'll learn what it's like to work and she won't be naive about the world which'll make her wiser hopefully.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot! Thanks for writing!

Author Reply: No, I don't usually make my Lothiriels spoilt - although its an idea.*grins* Thanks for reviewing - I hope you continue to enjoy.LBJ

YanicReviewed Chapter: 5 on 12/29/2007
Wow, I was just thinking about this story and lo and behold, an update! Loved it as usual. I like how Eomer is showing his leadership skills by setting an example for Edwick. And I also like all the foreshadowing you've got in there. Can't wait for more!

Author Reply: He has to prove himself in his early years to turn in to the character we love in the book. Thanks for reviewing.LBJ

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