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Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices  by Lady Bluejay 3 Review(s)
EStrunkReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/4/2011
I have been loving your story, but I've neglected to leave reviews up until now. So sorry, guess I was just wrapped up in it.
I love the additional depth you bring to Middle Earth (as if it wasn't already deep enough). Your characters spring to life, but they are woven so beautifully into the already existing story. Ever once in a while I have to remind myself that I know that they'll be okay (like at the end of this chapter).
The bit with Amroth was wonderful. His father's words to him made me yearn for some of the other fathers in this world, like Denethor, to have such faith in their sons. And I loved his reaction. It gave me chills to think of how terrifying it must be to wait for battle like that.
Lothiriel is great also. I have such a vivid picture of her in my mind. And the dilemma she faces is hideous. Her choices are so evil either way.
I need to get back to reading. Have to find out what happens.

Author Reply: Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying. It was extremely satisfying for me to weave the plot around the canon. LBJ

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/26/2008
I hope she isn't harmed! So noble of her to think of sacrificing herself but I don't think the enemy will be as honorable. Hope they meet each other soon.

Author Reply: A long way to go before they meet - she has to regain her confidence and poise!

Thanks for reviewing. LBJ.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/25/2008
I cannot believe she is doing this! I just hope whoever accosted her isn't the enemy. Great chapter! Poor Lotheriel.

Author Reply: Well she is not in her right mind. Hopefully she will come through it! Thanks for rewiewing. LBJ

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