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Adventures of an Éored: Sins of the Father  by Katzilla 2 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/24/2008
Phew! *sits back to catch her breath*

I'm with Eomer - I would not have turned back - the whole eored definitely seems to be against him - though we know the men were just stupid - not defending him...

And now this... I'm glad he warned his comrades, but it surely gave his place away... And the river does not seem hospitable.

Great tension in your writing - I do so love having the hair on the back of neck stand up!

Yikes again.....

Lady BluejayReviewed Chapter: 7 on 11/24/2008
Good job we know he lives to fight another day! Very exciting. LBJ

Author Reply: Yeah, well, but perhaps this will be another AU...? ;o)

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