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Adventures of an Éored: Sins of the Father  by Katzilla 1 Review(s)
FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/18/2010
WOW!!! so glad that you are back....I almost shout very loud when I saw the update, a very bad idea because I'm at work.

What a great chapter. I was so happy when Eomer heard the horn signal back. What a great warrior he is and will be. He didn't ask for help for himself, but will do it for a hurt soldier, even one that he didn't like. Then, my enthusiasm got lower after hear that the eored won't help him soon and the possibilities of Orcs being around. Good that they found the other riders.

What a mess, grief can be so dangerous, when is never released and I don’t see how warriors will release their grief in those times, unless they can kill whoever was responsible. I don’t see that physiologist treatment was at hand in Rohan…. I guess that Bema has giving Captain Arnhelm his punishment.

Please, update as soon, you know that I love your story and patiently wait for updates. Glad that you found your muse.


Author Reply: Likewise my apologies for not replying sooner to your wonderful comment. It gave me the extra-boost I needed to get my battle-weary muse into gear for the next chapter. I totally agree, grief can do dangerous things to a person's mind, and if this meets with hot-tempered and justice-loving youth, it can be an explosive mixture.

Thanks for staying with me!

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