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Gil-Estel  by Mirach 4 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/10/2009
The image of the two of them resting together--that is beautiful! Oh, how beautiful. And this time Earendil hears them--perhaps a gift from Este.... He, too, needs a bit of healing, I suspect.

Author Reply: It can be a gift from Este, yes... But he had several thousands of years to learn reading from lips, too =)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/7/2009
Oh, it's just lovely to see Elrond tending his son, and Earendil's distant encouragement. I like that Earendil is beginning to believe he's making a difference.

And I liked his thoughts about Glorfindel, as well.

Author Reply: Eärendil likes it too, I think =)

InzilbethReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/6/2009
At least, peace for both fathers and both sons. A wonderful, warm chapter, Mirach.

Author Reply: Both fathers, both sons (which makes three together), and several readers... Interesting maths! =) Thank you very much, after the many days of cold you all deserve a warm chapter, I think!

CairistionaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 10/6/2009
That huge whooshing sound that you heard was me, sighing finally in great relief as Estel slips into peaceful sleep in the arms of his Ada. Wonderfully done--a chapter full of so many warm moments. Loved it!

Author Reply: I wondered what was the sound, now I know it :D I love that moment of relief after the suffering, I was looking forward to posting this chapter since the beginning of the story!
Thank you for the review!

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