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The Valley is Jolly  by Canafinwe 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 19 on 6/13/2010
Good to see you back! It has been a time, hasn't it?

Trust our Burglar to notice the crying woman! Heh! Now, to see Gilraen unburdened at last!

Author Reply: Yes, it's been a long time!

Ah, Bilbo: too observant for his own good!

MerethReviewed Chapter: 19 on 6/13/2010
I couldn't read your story anymore without commenting, so I registered in order to tell you that what you write is wonderful. Each chapter is a sheer enjoyment, which leaves a warm impression. What is more, I'm really thankful to you for the language, as this is one of the few stories where the words sound naturally in the mouth of the speakers and a due balance is kept between vocabulary of different style groupps. Please keep writing.

Author Reply: Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. The remark about my use of language is especially appreciated! Thank you!

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