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A Deck of Heroes  by Larner 6 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/22/2009
I liked the idea of the earth itself released from Sauron.

Author Reply: I'm glad you agree, Linda. It must have been such a relief to be allowed to be as it was intended, or so I'd think! It was fun to try to think as the mountain itself might have thought, had it the capacity!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/20/2009
the earth itself resented the torment it had known under Sauron’s tyranny, and could resent those who caused it distress--before at last it relaxed and slept under its true Master’s hand.

What a fascinating POV to share.

Author Reply: I've never done the POV of a mountain before, so it was interesting to write this. But looking at various versions of the Tower card, many of them with a disintegrating or burning tower or building with two individuals falling or fleeing from it, it seemed to me that Mt. Doom with Frodo and Sam huddled near its foot would be the perfect candidate for this ficlet.

Thanks so, Shirebound!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/20/2009
The mountain is caught in a case of indigestion of cosmic proportions, forced to swallow the foulness formed in its fires an age and a half past.

Wow! What a powerful description!

Author Reply: Am so glad you find it so, Andrea. Thank you!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/20/2009
Larner, what a brilliant interpretation of this prompt! I don't think I would ever have expected to read a drabble from the POV of Mt. Doom before. The "indigestion" metaphor was beautifully done, as was the use of Aule at the end.

Author Reply: I read a wonderful ficlet for this prompt written by Raksha the Demon, looking at the fall of the Tower of Barad-dur; I didn't want to look as if I were merely copying her, and after all, it was in the Sammath Naur where the true seat of his power was to be found. But if Sauron tortured the earth itself to reach his ends, how glad it must have been to be rid of him in the end; and who better to ease it than the true Lord of the Earth?

Thanks so much!

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/20/2009
"a case of indigestion of cosmic proportions" - what a great turn of phrase!

Author Reply: Am glad you enjoyed it, Virtuella. I admit to having been a bit overtired when I wrote it, but felt it fit!

KittyReviewed Chapter: 19 on 12/20/2009
The destruction following the Ring going into the fire must have been spectacular, to say the least. I can well see Aulë having a hand in containing the damage and making sure the devastation didn't reach the 'good guys' and endanger them.

Author Reply: One of my favorite visuals from RotK is Aragorn and those surrounding him watching with awe as Aule shakes down all the signs of the might of Mordor, once the Ring is destroyed. Aule must have been delighted to be allowed finally to do the equivalent of selective surgery on the area to destroy those signs!

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