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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan  by Lialathuveril 9 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/29/2010
They make quite the pair, really. And she set fire to her brother's boat? Heh!

Author Reply: She's a bit of an arsonist...

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/1/2010
Nothing like a man's warm legs for getting one's cold feet warmed up...

The episode with the burned boats was spot on!

Author Reply: This Lothiriel is turning into a bit of a pyromaniac ;-)

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/23/2010
Laughed out loud while I was reading Lothy's childhood victory over her older brother. At least Leona has an idea what he will be up against when he finally confesses everything to her.

FantasyFanReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/16/2010
I am enjoying this incarnation of Eomer and Lothiriel very much. But I can't help but keep thinking of what must be going on back at the camp. Not only has Lothiriel disappeared, which must be terrifying to her father and brother, but Eomer has disappeared as well, which ought to be terrifying to the entire nation of Rohan! Can they put it together from the clues? Or has Eomer managed to get word to them that he/they are safe, from the village they stopped at? Either way, there's going to be a lot of 'splainin to do!

Author Reply: Hello FantasyFan,
yes, I'm sure the camp at Cormallen is quite busy! However, since the story is told from Lothiriel's point-of-view we won't find out till she does, which will be a little later. As for Léona sending word to her father, he has actually given his word not to do so, it was one of Lothiriel's conditions to let him get in the boat ;-)

Thanks for reviewing.
Lia

galimerilReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/12/2010
Oh you evil author, just when it was getting even better you leave me to hang from the cliff as it were! Such an enjoyable tale and very creative at that! Beautifully written, I think I'm going to enjoy however you manage to reveal 'Leona!'

Galimeril ;D

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
you should know me by now, being an 'evil author' is second nature to me! And you might enjoy how the truth comes out, but perhaps Léona and Lothiriel won't...

Still, it will take a little longer anyway ;-)

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/10/2010
This is such a fun story! She's going to be so mad... embarrassed? when she finds out who he is. :) I can't wait to find out... and yet I don't want the story to end too soon! Thanks for writing and sharing this with us.

Author Reply: Hello Radbooks,
there are still a few more chapters to go and a few more twists in this tale until she finds out, although we're past the middle of the story by now. But she won't be pleased...

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

hell_kat121Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/10/2010
Oh I love this story!! She poisoned her brothers wine, attempts to kidnap him and now we find out that she has burned his boat in the past! Excellent! I like this girl! Horrible spot to stop at though, why'd he freeze? Did he hear something or did it occur to him he'd already crossed her and she just doesn't know it yet?

Author Reply: Hello hell_kat,
I agree this Lothiriel has turned out rather wild, but then that's the kind of woman it takes to abduct a king. As for why he froze, yes, it dawned on him that he has already crossed her and perhaps he should worry about what she'll do to him when the truth comes out ;-)

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/10/2010
Utterly delightful! I laughed out loud at times and it is always fun knowing something the characters(Or rather Lothiriel) don't!

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
yes, I really enjoy playing with the different levels of knowledge in this piece. It's what makes writing this so much fun.

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/10/2010
"Léona broke down with helpless laughter. “Remind me never to cross you!”

Then suddenly he sobered"

I guess that he is contemplating what will happen to him when she find out. She will be cross with him, no doubt. Well, he got a fair warning.

Wonderful chapter, waiting for more.


Thank you

Author Reply: Hello Fantasia,
yes, it's slowly dawning on Léona that he's got a tiger by the tail here! But like you said, he got fair warning, and also he's got nobody to blame but himself, really.

Thanks for reviewing!
Lia

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