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The Abduction of Éomer, King of Rohan  by Lialathuveril 7 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 7/30/2010
Corethir is a real piece of work, isn't he? Nasty git! Now, to see the matter properly ended.

Author Reply: It was a pleasure to have Eomer finish him off!

whitewaveReviewed Chapter: 11 on 6/13/2010
Lothy seems to trust Leona completely here, which is a good sign. The first time I read this it seemed very encouraging to me. Found myself wishing that he had "confessed" to her before all of this ever happened but then, it would have led them elsewhere.

Author Reply: Yes, I agree. I think that in an emergency Lothiriel's true feelings take over, so she just does as he tells her, like you said, trusting him blindly.

galimerilReviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/4/2010
Happy Easter to you as well! What an adventure! I hope your hand heals so that I may be further enthralled! I was so scared for poor Lotheriel! I hope Eomer gives him what he's got coming!

Author Reply: Hello Galimeril,
don't worry, Corethir will get his just desserts (after fair warning as well).

Thanks for reviewing.
Lia

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/1/2010
What an exciting chapter! For a dreadful moment I thought Lothirioel was captured. Eagerly awaiting more. Please don't worry about review replies and take care of your hand. Hope you have a Happy Easter!

Author Reply: Hello Linda,
thanks, my hand is slowly getting better. I think the new mouse and keyboard at work are doing the trick. And I'm pleased that you liked the chapter.

A very nice Easter to you and your family as well!
Lia

VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/1/2010
Gah! I should have waited till you had finished the whole story. Now I have to sit and wait for an update!

Author Reply: LOL. Yes, you chose a bad time to start reading, I'm afraid! But I've got the whole thing in rough draft, so even with resting my hand, I should still manage to get the next chapter out by Wednesday.

A Happy Easter to you and your family and again thanks for reading!
Lia

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 11 on 4/1/2010
Hi Lia,

I'm glad that your hand is getting better.

I really liked the scene of Lothy running and her struggles with that minor lord. It was very real. Of course, Leona acting as a real Knight was perfect.
I know that the Prince is very worry about her, but at some point he had to understand that he puts her in danger too, with all those hunters after her.
I have been thinking what are they doing about Eomer, is anyone looking for him too? If a Princess and a King disappear, you will think that both kingdoms will assume that they were kidnapped by enemies, but they only talk about a princess sailing away, and Eomer?

Happy Easter and enjoy and rest. Get well!
.

Author Reply: Hello Fantasia,
I believe Imrahil just acted out of worry and did not think his offer through. He did stipulate he wanted her back 'safe and unhurt', but unfortunately Corethir wanted more than just the reward.

And it's very strange that nobody is looking for Eomer, isn't it? I wonder what's going on at Cormallen?

Sorry for teasing you, but it will all come out very soon ;-)

Happy Easter!
Lia

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 11 on 3/31/2010
Oh,just lovely! I knew someone was gonna catch up with them and whats up with Corethir thinking he's gonna be Lotheriel's husband, what a scum bucket, hope Lotheys okay, exciting chapter with much action in it. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Hello Elfingimp,
Yes, Corethir is a right scumbucket, isn't he! However, don't worry, he's about to get his just deserts. He was warned after all.

Happy Easter!
Lia

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