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'Til Death Do Us Part  by Haleth 2 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/9/2010
This is becoming quite an adventure for Haleth. Seeing the empty dock and city would be heartbreaking to me. I would rather have the elves never leave. Too bad they're only fiction.

I eagerly await the posting of the next chapter.

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Tari. It is sad that the elves are only fiction. As a society, we could use advice from those who take a really long term view of things. Thanks again.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/6/2010
Ha!Ha! I had to laugh at Inglor's answers to Haleth, he so doesn't have a clue as to what's going on in her head. Her remarks about the elves went over the top of his head as well or at least he's smart enough not to take the bait, it's almost like they are living in two different worlds isn't it? I wonder what would happen if the worlds collided? LOL! Bam! Well I'll leave you on that thought, as always this is one of my favorite stories. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Elfingimp. They really do live in two completely different worlds. Inglor seems to be catching on to this. Or at least he's learned some of the things that antagonize Haleth (even if he doesn't understand why) and he tries to avoid them.

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