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'Til Death Do Us Part  by Haleth 6 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/19/2010
So Inglor pushed Haleth onto his ship, did he? Very interesting. His knowledge of the waters was a true lifesaver. I don't think they'll be seeing anymore Corsairs. But, what will happen to Haleth? He can't take her to the Undying Lands, so where will he leave her?

Questions, questions, and more questions.


Author Reply: Yes, Inglor dropped Haleth onto his ship. It's probably the only way he could have gotten her onto it. Where will he leave her? The Gulf of Lune is fairly long. He could drop her off somewhere along the shore.

Lynn HReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/14/2010
I think I see where you are going with this, but then again I've had other wrong ideas... Thank you for letting me read over your shoulder the story you want to read.

Author Reply: Hello, Lynn. I'd love to know where you think the story is going. I won't give anything away, but I'd really like to hear your thoughts. Thank-you for reviewing.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/12/2010
And was I worried? No,well maybe just a smidgen. LOL! I love Inglor! I so wish they could go to the undying lands together. Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: I hope you were worried a little bit! Otherwise is would have been boring. Thanks for reviewing.

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/11/2010
I have to agree with Jay. You just want to give that Elf a smack! *LOL* At least they're safe from the Corsairs. Now to see to where Inglor plans on sailing them.

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Fiondil. Inglor certainly wouldn't win any awards for communication, would he?

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/11/2010
How is it that when Inglor has just done something amazing and saved their lives, I still want to hit him? I don't blame Haleth one bit!



Author Reply: Inglor has a talent for being maddening. I imagine that he was a very difficult child to raise.

eilujReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/11/2010
Such a prosaic explanation: I was hoping the Gondorian navy would arrive! As it is ... well, the dwarves will have fun finishing them off.

Author Reply: The Gondorian navy? I hadn't thought of them. What would likely have happened is that the Corsairs would have landed and Haleth would have been taken prisoner as one of them...again...or at least held under suspicion of being up to no good. Inglor could have escaped in the confusion and the last she'd have seen of him was the white ship, sailing down river just before she was taken prisoner.

Although I think I'd rather face the Gondorian navy than the dwarves. The navy would eventually turn back. The dwarves never would.

Thanks for reviewing.



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