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'Til Death Do Us Part  by Haleth 6 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 28 on 12/5/2011
Poor Haleth feels like a fish out of water (I know how that is). I would have thought that being granted immortality would have restored her youthful looks.


(I hope the next chapter will be posted in the not too distant future.)

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Tari. Haleth probably hoped that her body would be more youthful as well. No one likes the aches and pains of getting older.

Haleth

galathilReviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/12/2011
Consideing she can't remember people,I think she is doing well if some what unhappy. By the sound of it Inglor is not fairing to good either.The peices are starting to fall into place now.I hope that our two heros do find their way to one to one another.Can't wait for the next chapter of this great story.LOL Galathil.

Author Reply: Haleth's memory has never been good. Now that the memories seem to be coming back, she's not sure if they're real. Inglor can't be very happy, either; Haleth isn't happy with the decision he made for her. The two of them could have advanced degrees in lack of communication and miscommunication.

Thank-you for reviewing, Galathil.

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/9/2011
Haleth seems to be all over the map with her memories. Maybe she's experiencing racial memories or something. *grin* And I'm wondering if Inglor isn't fading. It sure sounds as if the ellon is not himself. Looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Haleth is a mess. She always has been, but until now she always had a task to distract her. Currently she is lacking a purpose. Racial memories...that's an interesting idea. Would you mind if I maybe borrowed it?

Thank-you for reviewing, Fiondil.

FreyalynReviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/9/2011
Thank you for an update - I was wondering where you'd gone. Lots of lovely details here, but even now there is lots of information being provided that will all lead to the final denouement, I hope. And what's up with Inglor? And can Haleth last out without going crackers - perhaps she might be allowed to spend some time in the country, perhaps? Thank you.

Author Reply: Haleth's mental state has never been exceptionally stable; it's just harder for her to ignore. Poor Inglor. No matter what he does Haleth it angry with him.

Thank-you for reviewing, Freyalyn.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/8/2011
I would like to know more about that memory...I feel bad for Haleth it seems she is miserable and what the heck is wrong with Inglor? Well maybe she will escape somehow....you never know with Haleth do you? I so want to read more! Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, Elfingimp. Haleth is miserable in a place where everyone's supposed to be happy...or at least contented. Life in Aman isn't perfect for the Elves, but she's only beginning to realize that.

Still, after being raised on stories of a land that is perfect, it's hard to let go of those expectations, especially when one doesn't want to appear to be ungrateful.

Thanks again.

Haleth

eilujReviewed Chapter: 28 on 11/8/2011
Now she's having First Age memories. Multiple First Age memories. Curiouser and curiouser!

It's good to see more of this story.

Looks like poor Inglor hasn't been having a good time either.

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, eiluj. Haleth is having a lot of memories. How many are true and how many are made up remains to be seen. She is, as always, a mess. A high functioning mess, but still a mess.

Author Reply: Thank-you for reviewing, eiluj. Haleth is having a lot of memories. How many are true and how many are made up remains to be seen. She is, as always, a mess. A high functioning mess, but still a mess.

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