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Shadows of the Past  by Laikwalâssê 2 Review(s)
ireneReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/14/2010
Really, now I have to say; Poor Thranduil! You should think on giving him a chance to prove that he is a great elf like the others...

In my private universe, Thranduil is very, very clever, even cunning. He is
a formidable elf by all means. He would never behave like your Thranduil.
So, you can see how much I like your story and read with pleasure. It's your imagination and fine writing which did this!



Author Reply: Hi Irene, I cannot express how happy I´m about your kind words. I´m so glad you like the story so much but maybe when you bear with me till the end you will see that my Thranduil is not as weak and powerless as you think. I see him also as a powerful elf, the most interesting elf, in fact, above all others. That you find my writing `fine`leaves me speachless, because it´s not my first language and my beta readers have a lot of work to do to make this readable. Nonetheless many thanks for this encouraging review. Lai

minuialReviewed Chapter: 11 on 5/13/2010
Hi. This was quite a dark chapter. The situation is indeed desperate for Thranduil. Lets hope that things will start to improve soon and the darkness will be defeated (at least for the moment). Waiting for the next chapters.
Thank you.

Author Reply: yes, it was indeed and the King needs some respite. I will look what I can do for him. I´m glad you are still following the story and enjoying it. Thanky ou so much for the review. I appreciate every one. The next chapter is almost done. Lai

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