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B2MeM 2011: Haradhrim Nights  by Mirach 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/18/2011
Very sensual. I feel sorry for the girl in many ways. Well, well done.

Author Reply: In many ways? I guess it's even more after the following two chapters. She died in the beginning of the story, but somehow she is still present there even as I write the current chaprets...

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/4/2011
Just a small typo in the author's note - you wrote "mistages" instead of "mistakes". ;)


Sun fell into a glass of wine and kissed her lips.
Wow. Just - wow. *speechless*

Author Reply: Lol, that's really the best place to make a "mistage"! Thanks for spotting it! :D

And thank you very much for the review!

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