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| Revolution by Laikwalâssê | 2 Review(s) |
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| BeeGee | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/24/2011 |
| You are still keeping the tension up there, very good! The elves' desperation really came through, how helpless they feel, and the suddenness of it all. Poor little elfings! I can't wait to read what happens next! Author Reply: I´m so glad you find my descriptions believable, BeeGee. Poor elves indeed! They are somewhat overextended with such a situation. The next chapter will be up soon. Thank you so much for reviewing. Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/22/2011 |
| Poor Legolas is just too young to understand why he can't go home, isn't he? And now they have to leave again. Hopefully they will be able to get away in time and I hope little Legolas doesn't pull a temper tantrum at the wrong moment. *grin* Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks. Author Reply: and the house of Oropher is known for throwing temper tantrums...*g*. It´s hard for a elfling so young to understand in a world where Ada can still make everything alright. Thank you for your much appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai | |