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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/16/2012
Poor Thranduil. To have to sit there and listen to the children crying. How horrid for a ruler. Especially knowing that all he has to do is capitulate.

Hurry help. Hurry!

Author Reply: and capitulate he never will, or will he? Hurry help indeed! Thank you so much for an much appreciated review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/14/2012
Definitely Thoran needs to be stopped and soon. What he is planning is totally unforgiveable. Not even Fëanor went that far. The suspense is killing me, if not Thranduil. LOL!

Author Reply: you are right: he is worse then Feanor! Yet I fear Thranduil will have to endure a bit longer and you too. LOL! Thank you so much for reviewing, Fiondil. Lai

BeeGeeReviewed Chapter: 17 on 4/14/2012
Wow! You really have shown the torment Thranduil is going through mentally. He is used to taking care of his people as family, and now his helplessness is really taking its toll. Well written!

Author Reply: thank you so much BeeGee. I´m glad the feeling came across so well. Thranduil is strong but even he has his limits. I really appreciate your review. Lai

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