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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 21 on 5/21/2012
Thoran is certainly a sick bastard, playing such games. I hope Saeron succeeds in finding his father and the children soon, but something tells me he's doomed to fail. You're almost as mean as I am with my characters. LOL!

Author Reply: he´s a sick bastard indeed! Your assumption may be right. Where is the fun without being a little mean? LOL! Thak you so much for a much appreciated review, Fiondil!

galathilReviewed Chapter: 21 on 5/21/2012
I am throughly enjoying your story.You have had me on the edge of my seat a couple times.I don't want to be in Thoran's shoes, when Galion and the others catches up with him.Have a feeling, that things will not be pleasant for him.Appologes for not reviewing sooner.Life in my house is crazy and thats on a good day. Can't wait for the next chapter.LOL Galthil.

Author Reply: you are welcome, Galathil. I´m glad for any review and appreciate it very much. you are right: Thoran should run when help arrives. I had you on the edge of your seat? Then I have done something right!LOL! I will update soon, promise. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 21 on 5/21/2012
Oh dear! I hope one of the warriors brought Luindil with them. He really should have been questioned..... this is dark!

Author Reply: there are many questions to be answered and I can promise that it will get even darker. LOL! Thank you so much for your review. Lai

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