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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 3 Review(s)
elizaReviewed Chapter: 24 on 6/26/2012
Wow, great chapter. Despair and hope all in a single chapter AND the calvary arrives to save the day. Boy, I'm a happy gal.

thanks again.

Author Reply: you are welcom. Thank YOU so much. I´m glad the chapter worked so well! I really appreciate your review, thanks! Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 24 on 6/26/2012
A very exciting chapter, Lai. Trust Glorfindel to show up in the nick of time, and Celeborn, too! eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Author Reply: indeed, but better late then never! I´m glad you liked the chapter. Thank you so much reviewing and still following! Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 24 on 6/25/2012
Whoo hooo! A tense and awesome chapter. Great fight scene. The foolishness of the southern Elves. The courage of Galadhion and his troops. Elladan and Elrohir.

I thought sure the Crown Prince was a goner - but you did well.

It was splendid looking into the face of Glorfindel - absolutely splendid.

One of the best chapters yet!

Author Reply: Hi Agape, thank you so much. I´m not that good at battle descriptions but obviously this one worked! With help Galadhion had made it, yes! The appearance of Glorfindel and Celeborn was most fun zu write. Again thanks for a most appreciated review. Lai

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