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Revolution  by Laikwalâssê 2 Review(s)
FiondilReviewed Chapter: 26 on 8/5/2012
Ah, that was so sweet at the end, Lai. I wonder whose idea it was to have Legolas bring Thranduil his crown? A stroke of genius, that. Thranduil is one lucky king. But he still has a lot of work ahead of him. They all do and it will not be easy. Looking forward to seeing how things go from here.

Author Reply: thank you so much, Fiondil. Yes the ending was sweet. Thranduil can call himself lucky for a few genious advisors, I think. But he should not underestimate Thoran. Many thanks for a much appreciated review. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 26 on 8/3/2012
Thranduil gazed deeply into his son’s eyes and calmed his son’s agitated thoughts to a level so that soon the elfling was snuggling close against him content to be held in his arms.

A beautiful scene in the midst of a heart-breaking reunion.

(Though I do wish I had this particular gift to use on an unsuspecting granddaughter of mine. *g*)

I love the term 'raging disarray' - I must remember it for the times the same condition occurs in my life. Which is often!

And what a beautiful ending to the chapter. I was near to tears myself.

Bravo! Well done!

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Agape. Yes, this was a lovely scene and fitting for an elf like Thranduil. And believe me I wish for this gift also with my two girls, but it never works...LOL! They always produced "raging disarray" and so the term slipped into my story. You were near tears? Then I have done something right! Again thanks for your lovely review. Lai

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