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| Eleventy-one Years: Too Short a Time by Dreamflower | 6 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/20/2012 |
| I love the closing line of the first chapter. It's a very good start to Bilbo's life. Bungo is just lovely. I like his quiet ways and his calm manner. He is the perfect husband for a high-strung Took. Author Reply: I thought a high-strung Took could use someone quiet and calm; while she keeps him on his toes and keeps him from getting stodgy! I think they are a perfect match! | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2012 |
| A very nice beginning! And there is already something Tookish in the little lad ;-) "You are wanted. It seems this little Baggins has suddenly decided to be impatient to enter the world." Author Reply: Yes, he certainly displays some Tookishness there! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2012 |
| Ah, but welcome indeed, our dear Bilbo! At least she only went through that once that we know of. Author Reply: Of course her MOTHER went through it 12 times! And yes, Bilbo is welcomed into the world! | |
| Kaylee Arafinwiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2012 |
| Dreamflower, I made sure to read both the Prologue and first chapter before reviewing them, as you know me - I don't *read* stories really, do I? I *devour* them and then get disappointed when there's no more. :P I really am a piece of work for you! *grin* Anyway, speaking of a piece of work, this is one reason why I do not think I would do well at being pregnant - the fighting with my husband (whenever I acquire one, that is, don't have one of those yet either! *lol*) would be too difficult on me! As it seems to have been on poor Belladonna...and yet, "remarkable" as she is *grin* she seems to have pulled through admirably. Luckily Bilbo did too! And I'm hoping Bungo wasn't *too* upset by Belladonna's arguing! She couldn't help it, I'm sure! Now, I wonder what the next chapter will be about...*ponders* Eagerly anticipating more! Kaylee Author Reply: I am very glad and honored to have such a devoted reader as you, Kaylee! Bungo actually understands that Belladonna doesn't mean what she says when she's in a temper, sometimes before she understands it herself. If you know both my regular and AU universes very well, you might guess the next chapter... | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2012 |
| Like this beginning, my dear! Should be interesting... Namarie, God bless, Antane :) Author Reply: I hope that it will be! | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2012 |
| Oh, yay! I'm so excited! This is a wonderful beginning. Author Reply: I'm very excited, too! I am so looking forward to this! And I am hoping it will inspire others to attempt their versions! I'd love to see as many "book-verse" versions of Bilbo's backstory as possible before the movie comes out! | |