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Eleventy-one Years: Too Short a Time   by Dreamflower 3 Review(s)
AndreaReviewed Chapter: 43 on 5/28/2014
He could not help but feel grateful that he was unlikely to have many future dealings with Miss Lobelia Bracegirdle.

Oh dear! He should keep this innocent feeling as long as possible. Soon he will see that he can't avoid her!

P.S.: Since Tolkien was a Professor for Language and not Mathematics he is excused for this minor inaccuracy ;-)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 43 on 5/27/2014
Even Tolkien wasn't always consistent with himself! Heh!

Oh, but she does sound quite the pain in the behind she proves herself later in life. Ah, but must go save a toy from a small dog who's been digging in my toy collection again. Naughty Brendi!

Author Reply: He was terribly inconsistent, yet it's no surprise considering how long he worked, and all by hand; no convenient "search" feature where he could find what he'd written before at the touch of a button!

Oh, go rescue your toy!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 43 on 5/27/2014
LOL, a perfect explanation of Lobelia's age!

(Remind me to tell you about my grandmother...)

You are posting so fast I can scarcely keep up! It's delightful! I am interrupted because of offspring looking for transportation, but that just means I can save tomorrow's chapter for my morning tea.

No time to comment on the rest of the chapter but hopefully I'll have time to re-visit and leave a little better feedback on the morrow.

Author Reply: One last chapter in the morning and I will have met the deadline for finishing!

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