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Confusion  by Laikwalâssę 4 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/9/2012
We authors can be downright nasty to the characters we write!

You are fiendishly terrible.

But a great beginning..... My heart broke.

Author Reply: yes, we can be nasty but thatīs the fun in it, isnīt it? Thank you so much and a breaking heart was my intention. LOL! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Agape. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/5/2012
Yes, I believe that is how it could have been if one of them had been killed, or even badly injured in a battle.I have known ordinary mortal twins who knew when the other was going to telephone. How much closer would 3/4 elf twins be?
Feeling his twin's fea fleeing away must surely have felt like part of himself was dying. This should be good!

Author Reply: thank you! I have ever tried to imagine how one of them must be feeling. Iīm glad I could catch the emotions a bit. Thank you so much for your review, demeter. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/4/2012
I know someone else who was planning to write about Elladan dying but she's never finished or posted the story. It should be interesting to see where you go with this.

Author Reply: yes, letīs see where this will go...mind the summary! Welcome to my new story, Fiondil. Thank you so much for your review. Lai

ladyevenstarReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/4/2012
WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Elladan can't die!!!! He just can't!!!!!!

Author Reply: take deep breaths and trust me. I will not let Elrohir down, or? Thank you so much for reviewing, ladyevenstar. Lai

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