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Confusion  by Laikwalâssê 5 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/9/2012
Whooo hoo! So sometimes visions can be used for good.

Great tale. Fun (sometimes my heart was in my throat) to read. Nice ending.

Author Reply: yes, not always but sometimes. I had to think for a nice ending for poor Elrohir. I´m glad you liked it. Thanks. Lai

ladyevenstar Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
my heart just stopped and restarted again!!! excellent story! hannon le

Author Reply: then I did something right! The story was so much fun to write. I´m so glad it worked. Thank you so much for letting me know and a much appreciated review. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
So in the time between, Elrohir was subconsciously "waiting for the other shoe to drop", as the idiom goes! And when the moment struck, he was ready, and took control of the fate-filled vision. Wow. Perhaps their father has also forgotten about the troubling "dream", also. Either way, I am sure he will be very interested in how that battle ended. Very well done!

Author Reply: I doubt that Elrond has forgotten about the vision, but he will be all the more pleased how the vision served to rescue one of his sons. I´m so glad you liked my story. I really appreciate your review. Thanks. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
That was a very suspenseful story! What a bond there is between these two. I love happy endings. :)

Author Reply: thank you, shirebound. The bond between these two has always fascinated me. I´m glad you liked the happy ending and the story. Thank you so much for the review. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/8/2012
No, sometimes vision aren't all bad and this one helped save his brother. This was a lot of fun, Lai. Thanks for sharing.

Author Reply: it was also fun to write. I´m glad you liked the little confusing trip. Thank you so much for letting me know. Lai

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