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Fate  by Laikwalâssê 4 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/5/2013
Ah! the little one is home, an occasion for rejoicing. How fortunate he was found by chance by Elrond and Glorfindal! You have portrayed the emotional traumas of the family so well, and I suspect that caring for little Legolas will play a huge part in helping each one of them come to terms with Elarynia's fatal decision to dismiss her guards. Elrond to face his own wife's tragedy!! Truly is your story entitled 'Fate'.

Looking forward to the next chapter Lai.



Author Reply: I´m so glad that I portrayed the emotional trauma of the royal family well. Exactly this was my intention and you are right caring for little Legolas will help them all. Elrond had glimpsed into a tragedy he will soon face himself, but fortunately he does not yet know. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review. Lai

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/3/2013
So very glad the family has been reunited. And yes, poor Elrond will soon share in great sorrow.

Author Reply: hopefully Elrond will benefit from these experiences but we all know that he will find no comfort...thank you for reviewing. I really appreciate it. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/3/2013
Well, little Legolas is back home with his ada and brothers, but I suspect that there is more trouble to come. Poor Elrond. We know what will happen to him in the near future.

Author Reply: yes, Legolas is back home but that has, as you rightly expected, not solved all problems. Sadly Elrond will soon make his own experiences and surely remeber back at these days. Thank you for a much appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai

BessReviewed Chapter: 9 on 4/3/2013
Wonderful story! I love how you portray Thranduil and his family dealing with the grief. Poor Legolas... I hope he will get over the trauma eventually. And I already feel for Elrond for the future he will have to face.

Thank you for this great fanfic, I´m waiting eagerly for more! :)

Author Reply: I thank YOU for this lovely review and I´m glad you liked my story so much. More is coming soon, promise! The last chapter will let us glimpse how the family is dealing with the grief in the future and there is surely a long way ahead of them. Elrond will need all our comfort even if he does not know it yet.

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