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Thunder & Lightning  by Lady Bluejay 5 Review(s)
AjonesReviewed Chapter: 14 on 4/1/2019
Loved all these characters so much and how you portray them makes me giddy. I love this love story, the anticipation and angst that love can bring you wrote so beautifully. So painful to have it end. Thank you for posting .

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/24/2013
What a lovely surprise for Lothiriel! I've much enjoyed this story and am sorry it is over.Hope you will write more soon. Thank you for a great read.

Author Reply: Great you enjoyed. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. Some shorter pieces on the way.LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/24/2013
A perfect surprise. Glad they came the short way--had wondered why Lothiriel's party hadn't, actually! Alphros sounds wonderful! And it's been such a satisfying tale!

Author Reply: I thought there had not been time to open the way under the mountain so it worked rather well for my surprise. Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. LBJ

AnaReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/17/2013
"A ghostly castle returned from the depths of time".

"eerie silence as the captain crept his ship forward"

"like an army given the order to retreat"

Simply beautiful.

You really love the sea.

I live in La Coruña, the northern-west coast of Spain. I can´t conceive life without the sea, sometimes temperamental, sometimes soothing.

Of course such a tempting Horse-lord would convince anyone, but I have always had the feeling that Lothíriel was a prize for the brave and honourable Rohír, but what about her? Would love be enough after the years?

Such a beautiful castle by the sea, ships, dolphins, lovely weather, riding along the beach...

Lovely story.

Author Reply: Yes, I do love the sea. And until a year ago we had a sailing yacht. I haven't sailed in your area but my husband has been past that way a couple of times. The sea near me is tame in comparison. Anyway, glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing. LBJ

UTfrogReviewed Chapter: 14 on 9/16/2013
Yea! A happy ending. Great story, too. Thanks

Author Reply: Thanks - I like happy endings. LBJ

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