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Estel - Hope  by Laikwalâssê 9 Review(s)
galathilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/11/2014
Hi Lai, loving your story. When can we have the next chapter please. I really need to know what happens to Elrohir and Elldan. Also cant wait for Estel to come, to this heart broken family. I hope you can update soon. LOL Galathil

Author Reply: I´m so glad you are LOVING my story. Sadly my update only depends on my beta but she has promised me a new chapter today, so I hope to post very soon; please hang on and you will see Estel come and heal our plagued family. LOL. Lsi

SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/27/2014
It's good to see Elrohir bringing his brother into line for a change. Elladan has a great many fences to mend. If the brothers cannot re-kindle their bond, how will they be able to save their father? Will it be a case of too little, too late? Will Glorfindel be able to hold the fort, as it were? Is this what is called a 'cliffie'? It's a good one. It is a pleasure to read your story Lai and, as ever, I look forward to your next update.











Author Reply: its high time for someone to act but without consoling themselves the brothers will not be able to rescue their father. Even mighty Glorfindel is kind of powerless this time, I fear. I´m glad the cliffie worked and yes it was one and an intended one. *Evil grin*. A pleasure to read my stories? What a lovely compliment. Thank you for saying and reviewing. Lai

tiinaj1Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/25/2014
Please please please tell me this story will be continued & completed? Its wonderful - emotional, well written and different then other LOTR stories ive read....

Author Reply: DON´T WORRY. The story is long written and finished. It only depends on my beta how quick I can update. Thank you so much for the praise that my story is different. That was my intention. We´ve read a lot of the events around Celebrían´s abduction but never on such an emotional level. I´m so glad it worked for you. The next chapter will be up soon, I promise. Again thank you for a most appreciated review, tiinaj1. Lai

ElizaReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/24/2014
Now that was interesting and unexpected. Everyone has their breaking point and it seems Elrohir has reached his. Good for him. This seems to be the proverbial "kick in the pants". Elladan needed.
Very nice to see Elrohir step out of his comfort zone.
Well done Mellon nin


Author Reply: Elrohir has crossed his line of endurance and a few words of apology will surely do nothing to mend this rift. Elladan will have to come to his senses otherwise he will lose father and brother. I´m glad you liked how Elrohir reacted. He has to leave the submissive brother behind. Thank you so much for your review. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/24/2014
It is at last time to awaken and to do what he can to mend the fences before the rifts and losses become permanent.

Author Reply: its hight time to hurry home and pick up the pieces if there is anything left to mend that is. THanks for your review, Larner. Lai

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/24/2014
About time Elrohir got angry enough to get Elladan to stop thinking only about himself. I think Elladan was more shocked by his brother's reaction than he was by the knowledge that their father was fading. That's often the case, I guess. Well, it will be interesting to see how things go from here. I hope Elrohir doesn't fall back into being the submissive brother but takes charge of things because Elladan certainly shouldn't right now. He's been too selfish and self-involved.

Author Reply: both brothers have to re-think their attitude if they want to make progress and Elrohir is certainly on a good way even if it is high time. You are right, Elrohir will be in charge this time but has he still enough strenght left to save his father from dying? Thanks for your review, Fiondil; its appreciated, as always. I´m following your story but my time is very limited and you write faster than I can read. I feel bad for not leaving a review but when things have calmed down I will. The stoy is as good as all the others and with more and more elves gathering around the academy I wish more than ever to be there. LOL. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/23/2014
I am often glad that this site lets us review a chapter more than once. After posting that first one, I went back to read the reviews of the other chapters. Your reply to Fiondil's review of the last chapter has me adding the adjective "intriguing" to my list. The comment that Elrond will have to leave all of the way before he can come back leads me to guess that your hinted at "outside power" may be some of Fiondil's favorite Valar. I will most definitely continue to "tune in"!

Author Reply: I´m so glad you take the time and drop another review. The peredhil family is already gone too far to mend on their own, even if the twins are now returning home. Your guess is not far from the mark but I hope to have still some suprises in store for you. Thank you for a really appreciated review, demeter d. Lai

demeter dReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/23/2014
My oh my! Dark, intense, and absolutely gripping! You pull us instantly into Elrohir's tortured mind, then THROW us into Elladan! But now, at least, it looks like he can finally see what he has been doing to those he cares about. Why do I think, though, that things will have to become darker still before the light breaks through? You are indeed a Mistress of Suspense!

Author Reply: Elladan´s insight comes too late and you guess right it will become darker still. The twins will be devastated in seeing their father´s state. Thank you for the praise. I like the title `Mistress od Suspense`. With the next chapter I will try to reach a new level of sorrow, so hold on. LOL! THank you so much for reviewing, demeter d. Lai

lmamcReviewed Chapter: 5 on 5/23/2014
ANOTHER CHAPTER IS OUT!! Finally, Elladan has seen the light, or I should say, the fading light of his father. I hope they make it in time, update soon.

Author Reply: I´m sorry for the delay, but SOA was not kind to my new chapter, but now it worked. I fear you are right and Elladan has only seen a fading light. They will make it to Imladris but it will be too late. Some lines you should heed not to cross. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review. Lai

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