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| Estel - Hope by Laikwalâssê | 5 Review(s) |
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| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 7/9/2014 |
| Wow! Always darkest before the dawn...goes an old proverb. Elladan has finally opened himself to those he loves, but it seems to be "too little and too late." As Larner has said, all four in this chapter are in bad shape. Perhaps now, though, all will be willing to listen to your mysterious outside help. Author Reply: can it get any darker? Elladan has waited too long and must now face the consequences. Outside help is more than nedded now. Thank you so much for reviewing, demeter d. Lai | |
| Fiondil | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/22/2014 |
| Both brothers are in pain though for different reasons and from different sources. Both are fleeing but in different directions. And their father lies dying, willfully severing all contact with the outside world. He too is fleeing. This family definitely needs help of a divine nature to heal them and bring them back together. It is a bloody mess for sure. Author Reply: a bloody mess -uh! But you are right of course. This family needs help from the outside. They can no longer find healing on their own. I have to add some "divine" characters into the mess I fear. LOL! As always thank you so much for a most appreciated review, Fiondil. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/21/2014 |
| It is hard to say who is in the deepest crisis here. Poor brothers, poor father, poor guardian/advisor. All are in great pain right now. Author Reply: you are right. The whole family is standing on the edge. But who can help them now? Thank you for reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/20/2014 |
| It seemed they finally were going to bring healing and help but then they ran away again. How very sad indeed. Author Reply: the twins have no strenght left to bring healing, I fear. Help has now to come from the outside. Thank you so much for reviewing, Ellie. Lai | |
| lmamc | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/20/2014 |
| Wow, this was great. Now I am worried that Elladan will give up the ghost next. You should really go and check on your brother Elrohir. update the next one soon. Author Reply: it looks not good for our favourite brothers indeed. Someone must now intervene before all is lost. THank you so much for a most appreciated review, Imamc. Lai | |