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| My name means hope by Laikwalâssê | 5 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/24/2015 |
| I'd be happy to help you with editing if your original editor is no longer interested. It is a good story, interesting and different that deserves to see the light of day. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/23/2015 |
| Poor Eldarion and poor Aragorn and Arwen.I hope you will continue this. Author Reply: yes, poor child and poor parents! Aragorn and Arwen will need any help - mentally and physically - they can get. The Story is long finished but my beta has no time for me and so I sadly cannot post. Lai | |
| Semmley | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 3/2/2015 |
| lai, you have portrayed so well the misery and fear of Aragorn and Arwen and the empathy of their friends. The twins have done their best for young Eldarion, so perhaps now is the right time for Legolas to appeal to the Powers. Author Reply: I´m so glad the display of emotions worked. Not my usual playground. Legolas is surely at the right place and at the right time to do some good for the boy. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review, Tina. Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/13/2015 |
| It is now that estel is most needed within the extended family. Author Reply: in fact, bodily ans spiritually! Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai | |
| obsidianj | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 2/13/2015 |
| At least Eldarion did not die immediately. Now the question becomes what if any damage was done. I can feel with Aragorn and Arwen. You did a great job giving me the feeling for how interminable the long wait for news was. Author Reply: we all know the anxiousness while waiting and hoping. I´m glad the feeling came through right. Thank you so much for a most appreciated review. Lai | |