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| Ruin by Laikwalâssê | 6 Review(s) |
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| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/30/2015 |
| As Little Orphan Annie would say, "Oh My Goodness"! All at once. As other reviewers have noted, you have given us clues, chiefly Elrond's simmering sense of dread. I was expecting some subtle form of attack, or some sabotage. This was dramatic. But now, as another reviewer has noted, who really is this in Elvea's body? Or are there two in there, herself, and some servant of Sauron or Morgoth? This is really intrigueing! Author Reply: Glorfindel´s motivation is clear but he should not ingnore Elrond´s warnings. He should open his mind and consider that not all is as it looks like with Elvea. Thanky ou so much for a most appreciated review, demeter d. Lai | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/11/2015 |
| That was a hard choice for Elrond to make - let alone giving it voice to Glorfindel. I really do wonder if Glorfindel will succeed in helping her and to what end they both will finally come... Author Reply: not easy for Elrond to make the choice while seeing the desperate situation, but what possibility is left to Glorfindel? Thanks for a really appreciated Review, Ellie. Lai | |
| Matt | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/11/2015 |
| As always a nice job on this. Glorfindel's choice is perfectly understandable as is Elrond's response to it. Thanks for another interesting chapter--much as I wish they were a little longer.... Author Reply: I thank YOU for a most appreciated review. Sadly my time is very limited and so the chapters are not overy long but coming in quick updates, grin.Lai | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/10/2015 |
| I am glad she is now able to sit up, and apparently communicate at least with Glorfindel. I am not surprised the ancient reborn Elf has chosen as he has, but empathize with Elrond for his new separation from one he has come to love deeply as if he were family. Author Reply: understanding on both sides but Glorfindel is maybe acting a bit too blue eyed....Thanks for a most appreciated review, Larner. Lai | |
| Semmley | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/10/2015 |
| I am enjoying the unfolding of this mystery Lai. Glorfindel is so sure he has found his soul-mate, that she will recover and all will be well. However, even the Valar are unsure of the outcome and I trust Elrond's instincts that all is not as it appears. Looking forward to your next update. Author Reply: with all the joy and anxiety Glorfindel would not hurt to heed his friends bad gut. Thanks for reviewing, Tina. Lai | |
| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 8/10/2015 |
| “Elrond, I will stay with her, no matter what. Maybe when she has recovered I will follow, but now she needs me and I will not let her down a second time.” What a monumental and noble decision to make. Author Reply: indeed, but it is a noble and ancient elf making it. Thank you so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai | |