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Ruin  by Laikwalâssê 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/31/2015
She is apparently delerious, and possibly more than halfway to orc-hood. Now, to see if they can unravel the reasons Saruman had kept her so imprisoned.

Author Reply: I fear she is a bit more than delirious. Saruman has reached them at last and everyone involved is paying the price. Thanks for reviewing, Larner. Lai

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/30/2015
What a twist to the plot! it seems Elrond was right.

Author Reply: he seldom errs and Glorfindel should have heeded the hints and been a bit suspicious. Thanks for reviewing Linda. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/30/2015
Good heavens, what a shock for everyone! :O

Author Reply: indeed what a shock. For Elrond in being right and Glorfindel in losing all his hopes - poor guys. Thanks so much for reviewing, shirebound. Lai

MattReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/30/2015
Wow, interesting twist. Not unsurprising given the hints you've left but 'surprising' all the same. Thanks for your hard work on this and for a slightly longer chapter, too.

Author Reply: thank YOU for reading and reviewing. I´m glad you like the twist. I´m working on longer chapters - really. LOL! Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/30/2015
Poor Glorfindel and poor Erestor! What a wicked betrayal that was. I pity Elrond for being right in this matter. I hope Elrond deals with this matter decisively and before Glorfindel wakes up. Then again, if Glorfindel gets to confront his betrayer, then maybe he will realise he was in the wrong all this time.

Author Reply: Elrond is surely not happy in being right - again. I hope Glorfindel will now see reason and Erestor was at the wrong place at the wrong time. And all this in the face of the impending departure - not good at all. Thank you so much for reviewing, Ellie. Lai

Marianel Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 8/30/2015
This was indeed an unexpected turn of events! Even if Elrond hinted at some curiousity with this woman I never though it was demons.And where did the poor womans soul go?
Wheres the real Elvea gone to? I really fear for Glorfindel, what a blow for him. And just what are the Gods up to?I hope they can help our dear characters . You really gave us a stiff cliffhanger! I cant wait for the solution! Great writing!

Author Reply: I´m glad you like the dramatic twist. Elrond was right and Glorfindel blinded with old guilty feelings. Have the Gods really helped in the past? I doubt a real intervention from their side but wait and see or better read - grin. I really appreciate any review, Marianel. Thank you so much for yours. Lai

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