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Ruin  by Laikwalâssê 6 Review(s)
SemmleyReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/25/2015
Such evil and heartache. Elrond is desperate to leave, but Glorfindel is in a very dark place and will not listen to reason. I am enjoying this story Lai, and look forward to finding out how this misery is resolved.

Author Reply: Elrond can no longer wait but he cannot leave without knowing about Glorfindel. He is not to envy right now. Elrond´s misery is a mirror of my soul at the moment, as you know but I will solve the problems - here and there. Thank you so much for your review, Tina. Lai

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/18/2015
Morgoth's influence is still being felt, and Glorfindel continues to grieve the healing of heart and spirit he'd so worked to evoke.

Author Reply: hopefully Elrond can soon pull the warrior from this deep hole of sorrow. It would do both of them good. Thank you for a most appreciated review, Larner. Lai

elizaReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/14/2015
Hi Laikwalasse,
I'm loving this story but for some reason this chapter really has me a bit pissed at Glorifindel.
I mean, he gets his life saved twice by Elrond and you'd think he'd show a little gratitude. lol.

Well, it was nice to see Namo and Vaire. I always enjoy when they show up.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author Reply: Glorfindel will see reason - he always have. This time he only needs a bit more time. I´m glad you liked my Valar - they are not easy to write. Thanks for a most appreciated review, Lai

MarianelReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/13/2015
Oh dear...😖😱
Glorfindel..
Elrond..
Anticipating the next chapter !

Author Reply: poor guys - both of them. Looking forward to see you at the next chapter. LOL. Thanks for reviewing. Lai

EllieReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/13/2015
What a horrible way for Glorfindel to learn the truth and to lose his love all over again. I pity Elrond for all be had endured in this ad well. Maybe when Glorfindel does finally sail he will see her whole and well again.

Author Reply: Glorfindel would have deserved better. Poor guys - both of them. To see her again will be Glorfindel´s only hope. Thank you so much for reviewing, Ellie. Lai

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/13/2015
He would lift the ban, and the poor soul would finally find her way home. Vairë was already informing her sister Nienna to take all sorrow from the she elf´s shoulders and give Elvëa the peace she had long deserved.

Oh my. Such a tragic tale, yet still with a breath of hope.

Author Reply: that´s the least what the Valar can do for our poor Glorfindel. Thanks for a much appreciated review, shirebound. Lai

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