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Leaving home; Coming Home  by Mirkwoodmaiden 4 Review(s)
LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/23/2020
To answer your question, yes, I find the romance both believable and fun to read!

((hugs)) Stay well.

Author Reply: Lindelea!

Oh Good!! :-)) Yeah!

Stay safe! ((hugs))

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/22/2020
Awww. This was one grin after another (with a slight detour into concern for Arwen). Beregond is delightful here! Lothíriel may need to change her name to “lost-and-found princess”! I couldn’t help seeing her, Éowyn and Arwen cementing into a sort of Fearsome Threesome. What fun!

Author Reply: Lindelea!

Hello!! I'm really glad you liked it. I am so happy you like Beregond in my stories. He does add fun! and was lucky to not be slapped "upside the head" by Lothiriel! LOL!

This story takes place before many of the other stories I've already written. Specifically the others that I am referring to are "Changes and Acceptances" and "A Light in Midwinter".

I had to hint at the troubles that Arwen was facing in "Changes" in this story as it happens before it. In "Changes" is where Arwen does indeed work through the shadow that crosses over her face briefly in this story.

And yes in this story is where the bond of friendship between the three women actually begins. "When shall we three meet again..." LOL :-)) It has indeed been fun.

Did the romance bit between Lothiriel and Eomer work well? As I said to Shirebound, it is the first time that I have created a romance for one of my stories.

Hope you and yours are well. Stay safe.

((virtual hugs))

MM

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/22/2020
Éomer looked into her eyes, in them he saw a kind heart but also a fierceness of a mother bear and a courage that would always meet life head on, come what may. A fire for life. He was drawn towards that fire. It would match his own.

And there you have it. What a wonderfully written romance!

Author Reply: Shirebound!

Yeah! I'm so happy you liked it. It is my first attempt at creating a romance. And I tried very hard to make it a romance that only these two could have.

Thanks again for writing! It really does mean a lot to me!

Stay safe! ((virtual hugs))

MM

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 10 on 4/22/2020
It is the end of a busy, exhausting day, so I skipped to the end of the chapter to click on the review link. I’m looking forward to reading this with my coffee tomorrow.

Author Reply: Lindelea!

I shall look forward to your thoughts on the matter! :-)

MM

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