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Caretakers  by Grey Wonderer 112 Review(s)
ElwenReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/24/2004
Oh . . . I'm enjoying this. The spoiled Pip being taken down several notches. And the overprotective Merry learning that the world will go on without his supervision.

And yet, through all that, you've managed to keep the love flowing through the tale so that we can see that all is not as harsh as it looks to an outside observer.

I'm looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy this one. Everyone needs to get put in their place from time to time, even Pip and Merry. I am glad that it doesn't come off as being too stern and that the love and closeness is still getting through on some level. Thank you for reviewing. It helps get me through the story!

PervincaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 5/24/2004
This was the story I was going to read off your LJ! If you're posting the chapters there first, I may well continue with that plan. I'm glad that you managed to sort this one out, because it looks like it's going to be very good :) Little Pampered Pippin getting his just-desserts? Now that's something you don't see all that often! Especially not from a Pippin-fan, such as yourself! Should be wonderful to see what you have in store for young Master Took - and let's not forget Cousin Brandybuck :P

- Pervinca

Author Reply: This one did lead me a wild chase and it took quite a bit to sort it out. Without the help I received, it would still be in my doc folder at about chapter four. I am glad you are enjoying it so far. I did post this one first on my LJ and the main reason was because I was having someone else read and comment on it to get it ready to post here. I figured it might be easier to read over here instead of trying to go back through the calander and sort through all of the entires for the ones that contain parts of the story! LOL, If you read it on my LJ, the chapters are in order but there are strange posts between them that I made on days when I didn't write anything for this story, so happy hunting!
Thanks for leaving a review and for reading. (On whichever site you read.)

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