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Phantasm  by lovethosehobbits 68 Review(s)
ArielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/20/2004
Would you believe I started this this morning and only just finished it. RL can be a bugger at times.

Nicely done, tree. I was a bit skeptical that he would have been alive after falling far enough that it took hours to reach him, but he's being aided/hindered by magic - so I guess I will buy it. I am still wondering how the heck our poor boy is going to manage on Caradhras, with a broken arm, concussion and pnuemonia! Good grief - can things GET any worse? LOL!

Awaiting your next chapter eagerly.

Ariel

Author Reply: Ah but there is a twist coming. Frodo could never have survived the fall if it had just been he and the mountain. But he had a little help...muhahaha, you'll see in the next chapter. I *have* to make the chapters shorter. One, it takes weeks for me to update and two, alot of readers I think, like shorter chapters so that they can go on to read fics by other authors. More torture to come, thanks so very much for reviewing and reading. tree

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/20/2004
Wow, what a rescue! I love all the details you've thought up, and especially that Sam's practical nature is appreciated by the Big Folk at last. And this just warmed my heart:

'I still wants my Mr. Frodo wrapped up tight and cozy like, no matter what'

Lovely. Wonderful story, tree!

Author Reply: So glad you're enjoying it. I'm having alot of fun writing it as well. I was afraid I had too much detail in this chapter and that everyone would get bored and move on, so it's nice to hear otherwise. I'll be sending you a post of how things are panning out for California soon. take care, tree

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/2/2004
Ohmygoodness, what a strange dream/nightmare/experience! Poor Frodo! How will this "vision" affect him when he awakes? Eagerly looking forward to a warm, tended, cared-for hobbit, no matter how suspicious he may be of his colleagues.

:)

Author Reply: OOOOH...just you wait and see. We just need a little more angst...now, now..I saw that face, none of that now. I promise lots of cuddles and healing to come. Thanks as always, my friend, for reading and reviewing. tree

girlofringReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/26/2004
a *cliffhanger* no doubt.

Author Reply: What can I say? I just can't help myself, plus, hopefully you, my dear reader, will want to see what happens next, right? LOL

KatieReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2004
hey its me Katie!
YAYAYAY!*is very happy* great chapter! this story sounds gr8!
Cant wait till the next chapter!*hugs*
Lots of "hobbity" love,

Katie F.
Aka: Lotrgirl1415
chickloveslotr@yahoo.com

Author Reply: Katie! So good to hear from you! Glad you're enjoying the fic so far. I should be uploading the 2nd chapter sometime next week, so hang in there, ok?

ElwenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/25/2004
OMG! I liked your slow build up here. And I had not anticipated the lightening. Very clever. I look forward to more.

Author Reply: Thank you so much!! I have had this plot running through my head for months now and could hardly wait to get the story started. I wanted to finish Smoke and Mirrors first because I have trouble if I have more than one fic in the works. So pleased that you enjoyed the first chapter, let's hope the rest are so well received. tree

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/24/2004
/O_O\! *speechless*

Author Reply: Thanks so much (I think, lol) Glad I could do it. tree

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/24/2004
Holy smokes, tree! When you start a new story, you really *start* one, don't you? Illness, cold, hunger, the Ring, and now... this!!! Goodness, what a chapter. Don't make us wait too long to find out what happens next!

Author Reply: Janet--So, too much? (LOL) Hey this will be a walk in the smial next to Smoke and Mirrors. I promise not to inundate him with tooooo many illnesses this time. Glad you liked it. I've had this idea floating around in my braincase for months and don't think anyone else has come up with it, so had to jump in there. Stay tuned more to come. tree

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