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| Turnabout by Ariel | 14 Review(s) |
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| Elwen | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/21/2005 |
| Oho! Merry's reaction to the unbuttoning of his trousers was a hoot. And your stubborn but practical Frodo is perfect. Sam is the mother hen, as always where Frodo is concerned. And I'm very pleased to see tbc at the end. Author Reply: For a few chapters more at least! I am quite frankly astonished at the response this little thing has gotten - really! I've had pieces that people liked before, but I've had folks coming out of the woodwork to comment on this! Astonishing! Now if I can just figure out what I did different with this one and repeat it! LOL! | |
| Pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/21/2005 |
A very good piece of work... Merry and Frodo are rescued,but Merry is hurt and very weak. Frodo is worried about Merry,and sam is anxious about frodo. Pippin will soon find out and be at both thier bedsides. Please continue,can't wait to hear more... Author Reply: Coming along as we speak! Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoy this story! I have been overwhelmed and delighted by the response! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/21/2005 |
| Hmmm, very interesting indeed! What, no liver? I always torture Merry with liver when he's lost more blood than is good for him. (And how can you lose less blodd than is good?) Hurrah, Pippin! Pip-pip, Hooray! (sorry, couldn't resist the pun) You've surprised me. I was imagining a blow on the head, a slight concussion perhaps, apparently not much damage done, no sign of slow bleeding going on under the surface... With your penchant for Frodo-angst it seemed the most likely course. Hmm, Merry had a blow to the head as well. O the possibilities! But then there is a "TBC" at the end of the chapter, so anything is possible, I suppose. Thanks! Author Reply: I always aim to do the thing that no one expects... Hmmm... Yes, liver would have been better to put in the sandwiches. Hmmm... good thought. *makes notes* Oh, Frodo has things to do and say and figure out later in the tale - I had to have him at least somewhat upright for it. LOL! | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/21/2005 |
| O hurrah! How did I miss your adding chapter 2? No matter... I'll just go back and look into the matter now. | |