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| Broken Glass by Conquistadora | 17 Review(s) |
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| Amaniel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/8/2005 |
| I like how you've decided to bring out some of your ideas and just leave them unfinished to a point. It leaves more freedom to the imagination, but with a start in the right direction by you. I've always enjoyed your stories! :) | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/6/2005 |
| Of course I loved this! Legolas and Gimli and Aragorn before Legolas 'returned.' Incredible description here--some of your best. And the dialogue was great too. Loved it. | |
| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/6/2005 |
| I am very glad you decided to post these (great idea for some pieces you right for fun, discard from main stories or write as backstory). I loved young Thranduil and Luthien. Seeing him still young and innocent was a sweet change. It's nice to think of him before all the evils he had to see. And the writing was, as usual, terrific. You have a great talent for description. Great job. | |
| Unheard Chime | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/4/2005 |
| Hello... This is a splendid piece of writing. I love the way you have portrayed the relationship between Luthien and Thranduil... beautiful. Far too often it seems that fanfiction writers choose to ignore the differences between the Sindar and the Noldor, but this piece nicely emphasizes the importance of nature in the Sindarin culture. Very nice job! Author Reply: Thanks! :) Sometimes I think I stress the differences too much, but I try to treat both sides. I just had a bug to write something featuring a young Thranduil, something I really don't see very often. ;) | |
| silent planet | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/3/2005 |
| hm...i don't think i've ever seen anyone write Luthien yet (not that i've searched) but I really liked how you wrote her. Author Reply: Thanks! Marnie writes a supurb Luthien, by the way. ;) | |
| Lamiel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/3/2005 |
| I'm glad that you did not leave this gem hidden in the depths of your computer -- I thoroughly enjoyed it. The description of Legolas in his black and white livery is simply breath-taking, and I whole-heartedly sympathize with the maidens seeking his acquaintance. Poor Elf. Loved the interaction with Aragorn, and with Gimli. You blend rich description with equal measures of sorrow and humor, and as always a wonderful understanding of and respect for Tolkien's world. Wonderfully done. Author Reply: This one's been hiding for about a year now. Hopefully I'll be able to find a few more of these little fragments here and there now that school's almost over. Last class day of the semester! :D | |
| silent planet | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/3/2005 |
| aw...poor legolas with all his fangirls. Lol, Legolas 'trying' to grow a beard would be one for the history books. Author Reply: Like Cirdan. ;) | |