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Black Eyes  by Lialathuveril 42 Review(s)
vampfan30Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/23/2006
UHM..... is it in English or in a Tolkien language?? 'Cause, I read it three times, and I ain't seeing the "(dead?) sea creature" thing either..........

Author Reply: Hello Vampfan,
you're thinking along the right lines. I'll send you the answer.

Lia

Alison HReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/23/2006
This was very enjoyable, Lia! I'm so glad you're posting a new story.

Lothiriel is armed and ready for battle and Eomer had better be ready to deal with an irate Princess who thinks of him as a barbarian.I can't wait!

Well, unless Lothiriel was using seaweed as a veil I couldn't spot the sea creature.Was the dye in her dress taken from some sort of sea creature?

Lothiriel has real grievances with her father and even though he tries to placate her, I can understand her hurt.She is an adult and her father, though he meant well, made a decision for her without speaking to her first.No wonder she is angry.

Already I'm laughing at Amorothos and, so far, he has only smiled! I can't wait to find out what happens next.Will Amorothos help or hinder his sister and just what does Eomer think about *that* dress? Ha, no doubt Lothiriel could turn up in a sack if she looked at him with those eyes of hers!

I love this already.Update soon!

Ali.

Author Reply: Hi Ali,
I just thought to have some fun with the 'arranged marriage' scenario, nothing too serious, and then that military theme just crept in. Poor Eomer has no idea he's in the middle of a war zone, although he might find out eventually.

This is only going to be a short story (I'm still exhausted from the last one!) and Amrothos won't play much of a role, I'm afraid. It's mostly about Eomer and Lothiriel...and those black eyes of course.

Thanks for leaving me a review, it's much appreciated!
Lia

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